Unoalexi

Woot, Chapter two finally complete! Enjoy! Chapter two: The unexpectedly unexpected "He is perhaps the best assistant I have ever had! You see, he badly wanted to be a member of the mages guild, but.. well, you see.." Kapu lowered his voice and leaned forward slightly so that Yassin wouldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t overhear him. "He took the Test, but apparently he didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t have the magical ability to pass itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ In essence, he had the heart, but absolutely no talentÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ I couldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t turn him away, he had no where else to go! And he seemed like such a good personÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ I decided to take him on as my new full-time assistant, and he has been so helpful! Much much better than those dreary adeptsÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ IsnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t that right, Zeke?" Kapu leaned back into his posh desk chair with ease, as if he had never whispered anything to Bellatrix. "YesÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ" he said, his expression completely blank. He was very tall, at least six feet, with short tawny hair and a black eyepatch covering his right eye. Holding his arms across his narrow chest, he leaned easily against the wall, although Akka couldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t help but notice that he was staring rather oddly at Bellatrix. "Apparently I have interrupted some short of important meeting? I should probably go, leave you three in peace, maybe?" His voice was low and deep, like the growl of a wolf, and he never once shifted his gaze from Bellatrix. "No, Zeke.. You can stay here.. IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m sure Bellatrix wouldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t mind, would you? Anyway, you can just stand in the back there.. Hmmm, weÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll need another chair.." Kapu muttered something, and a purple chair popped into existence in the back on the room. "So, BellatrixÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ What were you going to say again?" Akka highly doubted that her mentor heard a single word that Kapu had been saying this entire time, for Bellatrix was behaving very oddly. She was perched on the edge of her chair, staring at ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâZekeÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ in shock and utter horror. Her hands were clenched tightly around the arms of the chair, and a chill when down AkkaÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s spine. Something must be terribly wrong. "Ehem.. Bellatrix?" Kapu asked, and for the first time in several minutes he looked up from his desk. "Is there.. something wrong?" His eyes were filled with alarm as he observed BellatrixÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s curious posture. "NoÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ nothingÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s wrongÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ" she whispered, and shuddered ever so slightly. The muscles underneath ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâZekeÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢sÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ cheekbone twitched, distorting his oddly blank expression. He looked like he wanted to bite something. "Could we have this meeting at a later date? I haveÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ things that need to be taken care of immediately, that I forgot about.. IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m sorry, I.. I have to go.. Come along, Akka.." Bellatrix slowly rose from her seat, clearly shaken. "Umm.. very well then? Fine, you donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t look to well, after all.. Get better, and weÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll have this meeting at a later date." Kapu once again turned his attention to the papers, oblivious once more to the events around him. As Bellatrix and Akka filed out of his office, ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâZekeÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ grabbed Bellatrix by the shoulder, and quietly snarled something into her ear before she could scream. Akka, horribly worried, could only make out a few scattered syllables. "ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæTraven not..medÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ inÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæplans ag.. orÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæve.. illÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâækiÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ him.. ne.. t. D.. noÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ ev.. att.. emp.. t.. warn.. iÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ I.. got.. the.. pl.. sÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæond.. ed.. V.. alÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ suc..en.. t..is t..meÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ.. bÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ.si.. ds.. si.. n.. vhÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæn av.. u.. car.. bout Ask.. anyv..?? Res..is.. is fuÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæile.. For.. t.. ab.. t.. an.. we.. wi.. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæave.. uÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ one.." He shoved Bellatrix away, knocking her abruptly into Akka, and swiftly walked down the narrow hall. Recovering her balance, Bellatrix silently walked down the opposite corridor, so fast that Akka had to run to keep up with her. "This situation is much worse than even my greatest fears! We have to warn Traven immediately!" Bellatrix muttered to herself, as she turned the corner practically forgetting about poor Akka, who was struggling to follow her. She ran down the stairs without even offering a word of explanation to the highly confused teen, who now thought that her teacher must certainly be mad. "Bellatrix, please tell me what was that about? Why were you so afraid?" Akka pleaded, having finally managed to match the frazzled BellatrixÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s pace. She stopped so suddenly that Akka tripped over her own feet. "You donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t know who that is!? ThatÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s Yassin!" She hissed. "Please donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t be angry at me, but who exactly is ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâYassinÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢? I thought his name was Zeke.." "Oh Akka, I thought you had a brain! He lied about his name, and his magic level too.. HeÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s just about the only mage IN THE WORLD who is as strong as Traven is! He couldÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ve killed us all right then and there, and I wouldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t have been able to stop him whatsoever! In fact, he couldÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ve probably killed all the people in this place, although it wouldÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ve killed him too.. Not to mention heÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s a prominent member of the shadow organization, Bluudkein!" "Umm.. what exactly IS this.. Bluudkein?" Akka asked timidly, backing up against the wall. She was startled by her mentorÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s sudden personality change.. She usually wasnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t this hateful and cruel... Could this Yassin character really be that bad? "YOU DONÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢T KNOW WHAT BLUUDKEIN IS!?!?!" Bellatrix snarled. She looked like she wanted to bang her head against the hard, stone wall in frustration. "Please, donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t hurt me!" Akka begged, alarmed and scared of Bellatrix violent reactions. " Really, I had never heard of it before.." "Forget it.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ muttered Bellatrix, and she started to walk down the hall at a brisk pace. " I really donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t have the time to explain.. Come, We need to talk to Traven at once."

The irony is killing me. -.- To the puffy law student- You need the capitalize 'English'; it's a proper noun. :XD: Please people don't criticize another person's grammar if your grammar isn't flawless. This includes spelling too.

Hmm.. I like it : Although the tiger one is better...

Apparently you've never read/watch the movie of Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix-best book in the world by the way. :lol:

Neither. F2p, if you want to level faster, pay for P2p. This may sound harsh, but bear with it. Having you gain levels faster will out piss off certain P2pers. P2p, you really don't need to level faster, you have tons of good, fast training places allready. Deal with it.

No, I don't think it's stupid. Why? Just think of all the items there would be in the game! Prices of common goods would soon plumment... Also, the cow paddock in lumbridge would be covered with bones...

ITS A FLIPPIN GAME! That dog is a blob of pixels on a Java sever, get over it.

OMg, a real critic! Do me! Do me! (BluudkeinWolf) Yes, I borrowed 'Yassin' and 'Bellatrix' though....(like Hylean here. You can borrow names as long as the character is 100% your own) -.-

+1 What was he saying? some ting about macroers..? I couldn't tell..

New chapter tommorroe, or tonight if I can finish.

I hate you for failing to copy me correctly!

Hmm.. very good.. me like, me like! :D So Hylean has been dispelled from the army-like thingy? Interesting...

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I hate you because the little pigeons inside my head tell me to hate you.

Hmm.. not much I can say about a sketch... But it looks like you missed a pinkish pixel near the tip of the center mountain.. Love your sky effect though... Also, toward the right side the mountains look like they were crammed into a small space at the last minute.. ether just put one big one there or straighten them out a bit..

Chapter one: The arrival It was dawn, and the morning sun had just risen from behind the sharp peaks of the Zargos mountains, bringing warmth to the earth once more. The snow sparkled in the sunlight, making the ground look like it had been covered in diamonds. The air, although far too chilly, was crisp and clean, carrying the scents of pine and smoke through a open window. Through this window, the sun streamed radiant beams of light, highlighting the brown hair of a girl sleeping on a bed. She was fast asleep, and not even the bangs of a desperate squire pounding on the door could wake her from her slumber.. "Lady Akka, Lady Akka! Unlock this door right this minute! Or else, IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll get Bellatrix to unlock it for you!" snarled the flustered squire. Evidently, he had been banging on the door for several minutes. "Hmmm..?" she muttered as she buried her head back into her pillow. She was dead tired, for she had traveled for many hours all through the night with Bellatrix to get here. They had come all the way from Leyahweiss to the south, and there was little time for sleep along the way. Traven had heard nasty rumors about Zammorakian mages plotting to overthrow the MageÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s Guild in the troubled lands of Aska, and he told them to ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹Ãâkeep a eye on thingsÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢. Thus, Bellatrix, despite AkkaÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s complaints, forced them to fly twice as fast as usual, with absolutely no stops whatsoever. At first, it was a exciting and slightly scary experience- it was her first time changing into a bird. After all, she was only a apprentice mage, and thus had never attempted such a task before.. but she found it rather easy after Bellatrix showed her how to do it. Then, after the first few minutes, it got horribly boring, not to mention exhausting.. Her arms wouldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t feel the same for weeks.. "Fine then! If you wonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t get up, then IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll have to call Bellatrix! BELLATRIX! BE-LAAH-TRIXX!" the indigent squire yelled, tired of being ignored. "Akka wonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t get up! IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ve been standing outside her door for several minutes, screaming and pounding, and yet she still wonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t unlock the door!" Akka sat up, trembling in fear. SheÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢d hate to see the look on her mentorÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s face if she knew that Akka hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t gotten up when commanded to.. Especially since they were guests at this place.. "Akka? If I have to unlock this door myself, youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll wish you never were born.." Bellatrix growled. "All right, All right! IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m coming! Please donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t be angry with me.." As quickly as she could, Akka popped on some robes and opened the door, not wanting to face the wrath of Bellatrix. Bellatrix chuckled when she saw AkkaÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s mismatched robes and tangled hair. "DonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t laugh at me! You were going to wring my neck if I didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t open this door!" Akka muttered, clearly upset. "Go back and dress correctlyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢; you look just plain silly." Bellatrix was a rather short, devilish old woman with curly gray hair pinned up with a owlÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s feather. She fidgeted about as she waited for Akka. "Hurry up all ready; we have to be at the west tower in a few minutes!" "IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m coming, IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m coming!" Akka said, brushing her hair as fast as she could. As she rushed out the door, she saw that Bellatrix had already started to run down the narrow Basement hall. "Wait for me!" Akka had to run as fast as she could to catch up with the speedy pace of Bellatrix. It was some time before they managed to reach the west tower room- the location of KapuÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s office. "Ah Archmage Kapu, sorry weÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re late.. My apprentice here is a little sleepy this morningÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ" Bellatrix muttered, as Akka observed her surroundings. The room was large, much larger than TravenÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s office, and filled to the brim with bookshelves and such.. the stuff youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢d usually find in the office of a Archmage. Maps and diagrams covered the pale grey walls.. well at least the ones that werenÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t filled with shelves holding books and models of all shapes and sizes. "ItÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s quite alright Bellatrix. Please, have a seat." Kapu gestured towards two chairs directly in front of his desk. Kapu was barrel-chested, with thinning black hair and a extremely thin mustache. Akka, tired of standing, quickly sat down in the most comfortable-looking chair. "Now, what seems to be the problem..?" Just as Bellatrix began to speak, she was interrupted by the arrival of another visitor to KapuÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s office. "Hallo, Kapu. Sorry for my umm.. lateness" Yassin muttered. "Ah Zeke! Good of you to show up, for a second I believe you werenÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t even going to show up for work today! By the way, have any of you met my new assistant, Zeke? "

Tyvm for bumping my thread! Vers 4 is up! I outlined the person, his hair, and the throne. Also, I toned down the glass lines a bit. To spialot- What do you what the guy to be wearing? The same stuff as the dude in your avvy..?

The picture of the guitar guy- how did you get it? By Googleing or something..? :-k

Woot, one cookie for you! *hands llamster a cookie* And yes, they were wolves in that chapter.. I probably could've made that more clear... All will be explained in the next part though...

Well, I thought to myself- How can I critique all you guy's work without even having a story to my name? Thus I came up with this.. Enjoy.. Bluudkein Wolf Prologue- A meeting in the dark It was a cold winter night; black as a ravenÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s feather and quiet as a mouse wishing to evade a cat. Nothing stirred in the chilly forest, and the silence was heavier than the blanket of new-fallen snow. Who would possibly want to be out in the dead of winter on a night like this? Yet Yassin had been standing in the frost for ages, staring into the surrounding blackness. His paws felt as if they were frostbitten, but this was a good thing- it helped him stay awake and diligent. A squirrel shifted sleepily in itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s nest, and Yassin flicked a ear towards the direction of the noise, but he quickly chose to ignore it- after all, it was nothing but a squirrel. Even a person as patient as Yassin would soon become restless, and he shifted uneasily from paw to paw. Were was she? Had he possibly gotten the time wrong? Perhaps she meant for me to come tomorrow evening instead? Does this mean I have to wait out here all night tomorrow too..? ArgghhÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ He began to pace, glaring into the ominous darkness.. It had been several hours later, and still she had not come. It was twice as freezing as before, and the ice stung his bare feet. He briefly considered lighting a fire with magic to warm his shivering body, but then decided that it was far too risky. I might be seen.. For thatÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s the only detail Uoveriee had given about their little meeting other than the date and time- "You must not be seen, heard, or noticed in any way. Especially by that idiot, Kapu." Yet still she didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t appear. Pretty soon, even the cold couldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t keep him awake, and his eyelid began to droop.. Yassin awoke suddenly, startled by UoverieeÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s sudden appearance into the clearing. "So you fell asleep on me, did you?" she snarled "Uoveriee! Uhh.. look you vere late, and I.. vell.. "OUT WITH IT!" "I tried to stay avake, I really didÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ" Yassin, now fully roused from his nap, hung his head in shame. She snickered as she turned around, staring at the fat moon. Patches of her ghostly black fur glared silver in the moonlight, wrapping around her slender figure like stripes on a badger through the shadow of the trees. "Yassin, Yassin.. what am I going to do with you?" She chuckled. "My most loyal and faithful servant canÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t even stay awake when his mistress requests a meeting with him?" "Vhatever you wish, my Mistress.." Yassin muttered. She laughed as she turned to look at him. His head was hung so low that she could only see his forehead, certainly not his dead right eye, rolled up uselessly in itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s socket. She liked it a lot better that way. "Relax. I let this time slide.. but next time.." She snarled. "Yes, my Mistress.." She paced a bit before continuing.. "So, I have called you here to discuss our plans.. Is everything proceeding as normal?" "Yes my Mistress.." "No ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹Ãâcomplications?" "No, my mistressÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ" "And howÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s Kapu?" "Ignorant and stupid as always, my Mistress.." "And Traven knows nothing of our plans, hmm?" "No, my Mistress.." She paused, ears [puncture]ed. Reassured that there was absolutely no listeners other than Yassin, she continued. "So, what have you been up to then..? If not dodging TravenÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s informants or snickering at the incompetence of our fine feathered friend, Kapu..?" "Let me assure you that I have indeed partaken in the activities you described, my Mistress.. However, I found it rather, easy.." Yassin raised his head. "YouÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll find the guild members rather ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâbedazzledÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ of me.. They are under the impression that I am, ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâA loyal citizen of our dear Aska, who is a deep, caring Saradromian fundamentalist, and supports the oppressing monarchy and all itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s actions." he muttered sarcastically.. "Good, good.. so we are ready to advance to the next stage of the plan..?" Uoveriee said, absolutely delighted by this news. "Yes, my Mistress.." "Very well then.. I need you to end the life of our Kapu, trust me youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll be doing the world a favor, but make it look like a accident.." "As you wish, my Mistress.." "I will meet with you again after you have completed this task.. Look for a badgerÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s claw and a pigeon feather on your window sill, and youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll know that it is time to see me once more." Yassin dipped his head as Uoveriee vanished in a shroud of black smoke. _______ Good luck pronouncing their names properly! :twisted: If you can tell me who I named Yassin after, you get a cookie :

It's the colors mainly.. THE COLORS MAKE MY POOR EYES BLEEED! :shock:

Uggh.. *shudders* You think this is your best? wth.. -.- Six kittens out of ten

Yah, your sketch looks femnine now.. but don't worry, I haven't finished adding the muscles and stuff yet :XD:

Mountains, maybe? Like the characters are fighting on a cliff?

I loved how they censored the 'O' in god :lol: