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[spoiler=Picture B] picture B please :3 (one on the right lol) Why were my pictures never indexed? D: Sorry, didn't see it :( Indexed ~ Jimmy_Jim

lol @ you :3

[spoiler=Picture A] Pic A :D [spoiler=Picture B] picture B please :3 (one on the right lol)

On topic, I wouldn't leave Runescape for Mechscape. Because i'm not likely to have all the goals i have set for msyelf finished by the time it comes out. But, I will probably try to juggle both for a bit, while i try out mechscape, and still stick to my runescape goals.

aww D: i thought it was pretty funny when i made it.

They will look like this.

Awesome. Haven't been spotted yet. I don't think I've been spotted ever :o For someone who stays on w99, and occasionally finds himself in forsakenmage, i'm still pretty elusive >:] EDIT: crap, i WAS sniped. oh well. once >_____>

I have my doubts about the rift being related to the dragonkin (I'm unsure if this has been brought up before now, but I'll say it anyway) The rift is just north of the digsite, where there is proof underneath the digsite of the civilization worshipping god Zaros. As the rift is just north of this, it is likely that Zaros is the powerful being that is referred to in the quest. Zaros was a feared, likely bloodthirsty god. He could be related to the dragonkin, but it is unlikely that they are related to the rift. There are no other occurrences that really prove that the dragonkin are prone to this sort of thing, or if they even possess the ability to do something like this. It's more likely to have been put into place by a god like Zaros, who is proven to have control very close to where the rift opened.

I have my doubts that MechScape will have a large effect on RuneScape. What if a lot of outside people come in, try MechScape, and don't like it? Then, seeing an advertisement for RuneScape (since both are owned by Jagex, this is likely), try that and like it, bringing in MORE customers? There are too many scenarios, and combinations of scenarios, to really make a good guess. My guess is, MechScape won't be an instant hit right away, and will take time to gain any sort of popularity. The first customers will likely be RuneScape players, but I don't see a mass exodus and switching of games. Personally, I am eagerly awaiting MechScape, not in hopes of switching games, but rather to see what Jagex has been working on for the past 4 years.

I highly doubt there will be just one graphics option, exclusively playable by those with up to date computers. While it is very likely that such a version may exist, it is also very UNlikely that a standard version would not appear in the game. Jagex is quite proud of the fact that RuneScape is playable by almost anyone with an internet connection and access to Java, and I highly doubt they would willingly shut out players of a new game. The thing is, they know they can make a standard detail, it's a choice of if they WANT to make a standard detail. And my guess is yhey'll want to.

LADY GAGA And her evil puh-puh-puh-poker face D:

Pretentious holier than thou vegans annoy me. :twss: Good for you, you haven't eaten meat for 5 years, I haven't had an apple in a few weeks. Where's my medal? :3

In the guide for the quest "Catapult Construction", the directions regarding locating the engineer are incorrect, and vague. 3. Exit the Tyras Camp and head to the Hunting spot through the path: East as far as possible South through the dense forest South through the trip wire East through the dense forest North through the leaf jump West through the pass sticks In the elf lands, there are many opportunities to go East, North, and West, and there are many different locations for the various traps. For a normal sized quest guide, the instructions could stand to go into more detail. A description of where you end up after reaching each point would be helpful, as well as a proper description of where you should end up. (Landmarks, etc.) Another problem with them, they were wrong. In my attempt to follow these, I didn't even end up in the general area of the Catapult Engineer. When I did the quest, the catapult engineer was located in the hunting spot south west of the Elf Camp. (The Hunter logo directly north on the map of the catapult.) Either this means the instructions were completely wrong, or there are multiple locations, depending on the player. A look into this would probably be beneficial, because that part of the quest guide was probably the most confusing.

lolwut

Or you can just put on a damn shirt, hippie.

i heard you pk from your couch am i right? No, it's actually too far away from my computer. And I don't pk anyway. NICE TRY :twss:

[hide=kinda big][/hide] Lol i got rid of my others, so I felt like putting up a new one :D I hear i have an awesome couch.

Chapter 2 An Unwelcome Visitor Lily woke up screaming, her pillow damp with sweat. It had been a week since her visit with Nana, and her dreams became dark and foreboding. Thick gray clouds had returned once more to the city, adding to her fears. She began to doze, only to be jerked awake by the urgent tolling of a bell. A few moments later, a maid walked in carrying a white robe, and began to dress Lily. "Miss, urgent town meeting," she said as she pulled the kebbit-fur robe over Lily's arms, "The guards spotted something most disturbing outside the city gates." "Oh? And what is that?" asked Lily, feigning calm, "I really hope it's worth getting me out of bed." "Werewolf," whispered the maid, escorting Lily down the stairs, "A female." Lily gasped, as she was led out of the house and down the street. The street was crowded with Varrock's nobility, all being escorted in a fashion similar to hers. "I say, they really should have waited until morning," grumbled a passing man to his butler, yawning, "It's terribly rude of them to wake us up so late." Lily and the maid strolled casually down the wide streets of Varrock, towards the city square. "Wow Miss, something must be askew," said the maid quietly, clutching Lily's arm. "What do you mean?" "A Werewolf, in Misthalin! It can't be a good sign, Miss." As they drew nearer to the square, Lily heard a distinct, bone chilling howl. Going around a corner, a large cage came into view, containing a werewolf with thick, matted hair. The beast was vicious, with bright red eyes, and sharp, yellow fangs. Saliva dripped from her open mouth, and she threw herself at the bars, trying to break free. "My God!" exclaimed Lily, clutching her chest, "It's absolutely disgusting!" Captain Rovin was standing fearlessly at a podium a few feet from the cage, trying to settle the crowd. After a few minutes the crowd was quiet. Only the crying of children and the snarls of the wolf perforated the silence. "Citizens of Varrock! Tonight, we found this beast outside our city walls! This beast, who comes from the foul land of Morytania, was sent as a scout to our lands. We are all in imminent danger!" At this the crowd erupted, men and women shouting angrily for something to be done, to save their children. "Please, settle down!" shouted Captain Rovin, raising his firm hands, "In light of the dire situation, we have put into an effect a mandatory evacuation of all women and children! Men, the time is now to take up your swords against the vile creatures of the swamps. His Majesty King Roald has issued a draft for all able bodied men in the kingdom. We have an established alliance with the kingdom of Asgarnia, and they have opened their borders to our refugees. So please, women, pack your things and leave immediately. There is no time for delay." The crowd stood in a stunned silence, as a thick black cloud blocked out the light of the moon. As people began to talk amongst themselves, Lily looked up to the darkened sky, praying for Nana to be wrong. What she saw terrified her. Standing on the walls of the distant castle was a large, winged creature, barely visible again'st the dark clouds. She let out a terrified shriek, pointing at the figure. "It's a dragonkin!" shouted a woman near her, "Look at the wings!" "Don't be daft, woman, those don't exist" laughed a man nearby, "And if they do, they wouldn't be bothering us here! This is a matter of werewolves." "Then what is it?" asked the woman defiantly, "I tell you, look at the wings!" "Vyrewatch," whispered Lily, covering her mouth. "What's that miss?" asked her maid, leaning in closer. "Vyrewatch!" The bickering man and woman stopped arguing, and looked at Lily incredulously, as if her realization were completely impossible. The news began to spread throughout the crowd, and people began to run. The figure Jumped from the tower, taking flight. It's powerful wings moved it effortlessly over the square, and it landed gracefully on the cage of the werewolf. "Vyrewatch," whispered Lily once more, completely horrified. The prophecy had come true.

After recently getting around to doing Defender of Varrock, I've been itching to write a Runescape related story. Here it is ^^ Chapter 1 Warning Lily, a fair, blond woman walked briskly down the main street of Varrock, enjoying the light click of her boots on the rough, gray bricks. After a week of pouring rain, the sun was finally out, brightening the dampened spirits of Varrock's citizens. As she walked by the general store, a man ran out in front of her, waving merrily. "Lily! I finally found you!" he shouted, after a quick embrace, "I have some great news, you need to follow me!" "Gregg, I can't," said Lily as Greg grabbed her arm, "I have to go see Nana, she's only getting worse." To Lily's relief, Gregg stopped his pulling. Nana had been getting sicker and sicker as the days went by, and she wanted to be there in case anything happened. A well known doctor was on her way from Ardougne, and was expected in a few days. Three days if the weather stayed as nice. Lily walked in silence to the nicer district of Varrock, where Nana lived. "Oh for the love of Guthix," growled Lily, spotting Nana's house, a thick black smoke pouring from the chimney, "She's at it again." Nana was a witch. She had lived in splendor all her life, as Lily's family had since the very beginnings of the city itself. And sick though she was, Lily knew that she couldn't be pulled away from her charms and spells. And to Lily's dismay, there were no spells that could cure her. Lily marched up the marble steps to a well furnished porch that wrapped around the outside of the house, and pulled open the thick oak door. She was greeted by a butler that bowed deeply as she passed, rushing up another flight of stairs. She walked angrily to Nana's closed door, and attempted to open it in vain. "Nana! Unlock the door!" shouted Lily angrily, pounding on the door. The door began to rattle violently, as if threatening to break. There was a light click, and the door opened. Nana, small and frail, stood smiling at Lily, her eyes full of laughter. "You naughty thing you," she said chuckling, "No need to be breakin' down my door, child. Give this old lady time." Nana stepped aside, letting Lily into her large, fragrant bedroom. Nana kept incense burning at all times, and tucked away into a far corner was a statue of the god Zaros surrounded by a multitude of glowing candles. Lily bowed her head in respect, and turned to Nana. "You're practicing Voodoo?" she exclaimed, "That's outlawed! They'll have your head for that!" "It's not whatcha think, child," said Nana defensively, "This work is commissioned by the king 'imself! We are all in great danger!" "What danger?" asked Lily warily, "And how bad is it?" "The gods will tell, child," whispered Nana, coughing, "All in good time. But I've been looking to the future, and I want you to get out. Run from the city. They are coming." Lily's stomach churned. She understood Nana's statements. The prophecies of her family were to be fulfilled.

I'm considering going to fight Bork, and I was wondering if anyone has any specific advice on how to kill him? (Combat styles, Armour, Weapons, Inv Contents, etc.) I'd really appreciate the help :twss:

You're right, I was thinking along the lines of a novel, rather than a spoken story. I hadn't thought of it that way :-k

I don't have the time now, but I'll definitely sit down tomorrow and have a good read of it. I'm curious what this antique smashing man is on about :-k

I agree, you don't need to use the tab button to make a paragraph.. paragraph 1 paragraph 2 Spacing like that would suffice. Since you can't indent, the gap makes the reader aware there is a paragraph break. The odd paragraph spacing is really putting me off from the story. You need to work on punctuation as well, the awkward punctuation is another turn off to the reader. Both times the man asks "What?", you forgot to capitalize the W. Same with "why." "Is my question to you" is not needed. You could get the same effect out of the line by saying I also changed the comma to a period. I can't bring myself to criticize anymore, I'm sorry. But you should really go through and fix the spacing, and then read it to yourself aloud, as if you were speaking.This could clear up some of the more simple punctuation errors that you've made. There's my criticism. :twss:

The punctuation of this kind of gets me. If you were to read this aloud, it would probably sound a little off, don't you think? Something like that would probably make it flow better. only a few problems. "In these rooms" can't stand alone like that, it needs a verb. Luckily, you have one right after that unneeded comma. "In these rooms sat dead bodies," is the way to go. And did you mean he quit his surveying? Wrong use of the word site. It should be sight. I could probably do more nitpicking, but i have to go... Happy writing ^^

I don't see what's so twilight-esque about it... Please share. o.O