There you go, the main things to work on, put someone time into it, alot more time!!! He is being a bit harsh, but hes giving you some good advice Looks here: http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=407286&start=0 For more tips, its a great tutorial for begginers, also, im interested, are you any good at drawing on paper? Ya know, with a pencil?