few things: 1. take out the part of the drag med on his face, add eyes, nose and mouth, drag meds dont cover the face. 2. sword needs to be curved more and the arm does look kinda gimped. You might want to try the sword facing down (in the ground) and have him leaning on it or something. background- Maybe have a few different monsters coming up behind him, like a skeleton, a dragon, an ogre and a goblin or something. Then in top left corner have your name with .... after it, and then in bottom right put"....has no fear" i think that would be sweet, awsome for first try dude :wink: