The comments you've read are there to help you to improve, not to be mean and upset you. Nothing is perfect, and this guide isn't surely, so people try to tell you what in their opinion is lacking. It's not spelling or grammar itself the most important thing when there is good stuff in it, like you say, but the point is that a good guide must be compared to other guides to be judged. There are a lot of merchanting guides already, which talk about feathers, and rune scimmies, and more - but they're easier to read, faster to understand, and the form does help this. A guy who reads your guide thinks: "why do I have to decypher every word I read? Where exactly is this place? How do I get there?" It's likely that the people you want to help with this guide are not very experienced with the game, so they may wonder where "west varok bnk" is. That's an example of a lack of pictures. Other guides show maps, precise locations and such stuff and this guy who was reading your guide moves to other ones. Especially if it's talking about first-level merchanting, which is possibly the most known subject for a guide and the one with most writings about it, a guide should be comeptitive, so either say something new, or say it better. If it doesn't, you understand it's pretty useless ;). Your guide is informative and helpful, no doubt about that, but many other writings are more. That's why you get all the constructive criticism, it's there to help you, don't flame who tries to make you better.