rik

[hide= clicky]darn!! thats handy when i am giving one of my huge advice's :anxious: and thanks ill lower the opacity :wink: But what version do you like more? the first or the second? [/hide]

Here is about my second serious gfx sig, and its called greenlife because its green :P i have 2 versions (only difference is border): 1st 2nd v3. v4. a little more blue so c/c please and dont flame to much since its only my second serious one :(

ok the short version: The colors, rare shape of shading around the knee's and lower parts of the leg.

what is the problem with the staff then? i think that there are only 2 points of comment on the staff; The staff is to short and the staff isn't shaded at all and get those black outlines awey : oh yeah if u still need some help i will help :

That's what I was thinking. Add some stuff in the background...maybe a...um...I'm clueless there.... :XD: i'll help you: a city, a forrest, a rock concert, a airplane crash, a highway, an lake, an parkinglot... so on... :

hmmm i could try that... and gratz with your 750th post \

bored... already posted this on runemetsa's forum but here is the final version: it has to be a sort of blue staff with nubish background (my opinion) Also if u guys have an idea for a chance in this vvy please tell me and i see what i can do :

not realy much to comment on so its good till now exept i dont like the pants :( but good luck with this : and does mac still make pixels?!?!

well i dont think its nice at all that you are making useless coments like this on a tag withought giving a reason, or at least some advice. taking a look back here, after a few months, the quality of this forum has deteriated, and i dont think that your spamming and flaming is a part of it. now that ive adressed that. overall, i think the tag is very nice, and is one of the best i have seen from you =) (havent seen any of your new stuff sence ive been gone.) if you want crits, heres some for you. -white side of it looks overcontrasted, and not very appealing to the eye. -the warp filter on the right side of it is nice, but doesnt add to the overall flow to the sid. make them more into the diagonal direction as the lines are, and i think it will flow much better. -the blending on the render is great. -the warp directly behind the sprite is awasome, but the rest of it, is just meh. -the text is blended a bit to randomly. prehaps add a 1pix stroke to it. -the lighting and focus is rather poor. prehaps add a gradient to focus it? oh and hi runemetsa :D OMG!!! eckered!! where th have you been? :shock: ontopic: there is still one thing more that bothers me: The sprite goes from light and then fades awey... it just doesn't look right :-s

ahh after looking at it for i manute i just realised your right :shock: i think the reason why i could see it so bad was because the colors are to dark and it looks pretty flat when u look at it for the first time. Only after looking for it very good u will see what it is :? :-s ... so maybe chance the colors a little lighter on some places to its easier to see what it is :

ahhh woopi can i have it? i have such an old and realy boring sig and the maker is also so bad that your eyes burn out because of the worse quality sig :evil: :cry:

i'am working on this at the moment and i have a topic for this is the gallery so you can see how it is going :wink: oh yeah sry for double or triple posts whatever it is :(

aww how did you dare to chance the border colors :cry: :shame: c/c on the background: the angle of the "camera" is realy weard and i am stil wondering what that brown thingy on the left of the pirate is... :?

First thing: READ ALL OF THIS PLEASE!!! ^^^ Thats from the helpful tips section of the FAQ, but since this first isn't that worse i think we just need to forget that and help you out :wink: so here are some points that realy need improvement: * Like already said dont save a pixel as jpg, but as png. For an exemple look at the post above. * I don't know if there is a door or a wardrobe in the background but if it is a wardrobe u need to get it more 3d, and u can do that by giving it a side so you can see how deep it is and if it is good done u shal see it gives a whole lot more 3d look to the whole sig. * Fire is never just a curved line but like you see on this picture it goes to different directions but it has again a sort of curved lines. * Anatomy - the knowlage of the human body, is missed here. You never ever have a sort of round head, never hair that exist out of 1 piece, you (almost) never see a body right form the front And you dont have shading on the body, what could have helped by giving this person a 3d look. For anatomy tutorials u could go to deviantart and use the search option there. That could help you making real-looking persons. * The text doesn't fit in the sig, there are white spots around the text, the text jumps out of the sig and the colors/vorm dont't match the sig. * The wall is pillow-shaded that means you have drawn a "curved" line and just one after that and filled the spac between the 2 lines with 1 color and the just go to a darker of light color. That don't works in sigs like this, because first of all bricks don't are flat, second they are straigh and third a wall don't should come to the front unless it is realy good shaded so you can see it and not only on the lines on the floor and the roof. Then go and search for some pixel tutorials (we have some good onces here in the FAQ) at for exemple again deviantart or just google. U wil notice that there are way more shading ways. For exemple u have a different shading way between a sky and a brick wall isn't it? Thats because a brick wall is pointy and a sky should sllok pretty flat but not to much. * The floor has no texture at all, u shaded it just like it is flat water that gets darker all the time. That were all important things for that i saw. If u would like to see some exemple's of all the things mentioned just tell me and i'll try to get some. Good luck with future sigs and i hope u wil enjoy making them : ~rik

the third version is great =D> but still the only thing that bothers me is that the background is pretty empty :(

a graffitti font would ruÃÆÃâÃâïn it realy... just search until u find a nice font :

it looks nice exept the background is pretty empty and the font choise is realy bad (my opinion). But i realy like the tree's :

ty demented and yes the shading is realy off... i am working on the background on the moment so within a short time i will edit the first post :wink:

ty, i have an idea for a background now have searched google for about 2 hours :-s -.- :wall: but oh well so ill start with background tomorrow :P

wow a new record!!! c'mon guys!! 28 views and no reaction? is it realy that bad?

its not german its dutch i shal translate is as good as possoble: The webpage can not be reprodused The most likely reasons: *your computer isn't connected with the internet * there are problems on the website * u may have typed the wrong adres that is the best i can translate...

hey, since today i have everytime if i just clicked the runescape world this: does annyone knows what this means?

it looks realy good exept that the left part of the sig realy doesn't fit with the right part. off-topic: robert_rdam gratz with your 1000th post :

Ok so since i have chosen the TET idea in my free sigs thread, i had to much school and since my grandfather can die every moment i didn't worked on it very much. so here is already the basic rock schetch and some colouring. yes i know its not much but like i said i haven't worked ont his very much. BUT i will work alot on this next week because we have vacation \ and c/c on this, so no flaming.

so the ending results are: first: picture A (dark_shadow) second: picture B (hiimben) third: picture C