Wow, that is so cool, the hair looks like a brush on Panit Shop Pro but that may just be a coincidence (sp?) Maybe try a version without the beard, stubble or no facial hair at all, may make it look better. I agree with the other person, too heavy on the outline.. Also, his stomach, looks likes its been punched in, or his stomach is being sucked in, dunno if you know what i'm talking about, its the first up-side down U shape on the middle line going up the stomach :?