1. It's 132kb. Forum rules state it has to be 30kb or less. 2. The shading on the armour looks random. Look up pictures of armour on google and see how it shines and how you should shade it (instead of just going about randomly). 3. Maybe try and put some perspective in. You should be able to see small things far away in the background, or even some mountains or something. 4. Did you use the spray paint tool to do most of the shading highlighting? That's kind of odd, and I wouldn't really recommend that. The line work on the guy is pretty good, just the shading lets it down. The blood on the axe is good, tells me you stabbed the guy? Keep at it!