Kuroi_Ame

Thanks, ter. Hopefully after some work, this can be my best work, yet.

Ter... one thing...do you mind if I use that head shape? :D I'm terrible at making head shapes..I think I might be able to do the rest of the head, just need the shape. Edit...Might also need those colors you used...

Thanks ter. Anyone care to c/c the rest of it? I'm going to try to finish this wip, even if it kills me..

Thanks, ter. I updated it a little, going to try to finish the linework and coloring before I shade. I think I may need something to look at for shading reference, in regards to what I wrote before.

Traps...?

EDIT: THANKS TO MXM FOR THE HELP ^After ter's help. ^After help on another pixel forum. And this is what I have so far.

I've seen your work before, dark shadow, don't hide your lies! I'll get the Flintsone band-aids ready. :cry:

Arrrrrrrrrgh... #-o I'm up against Dark_Shadow! :wall:

Do you even understand what i'm saying Paint isnt the best program on the block so I (ME) found it a bit hard to do does that answer your question 'mature boy?' I do understand what you're saying, do you understand what I am saying? You said, in your very first post "i only used paint though." That sounds like you're saying that paint is the reason why your signature is bad. Saying that insults me as an MSPainter. I'd appreciate you blaming the bad quality of your signature because you're a beginner, not because you used MSPaint. Just because you didn't find MSPaint easy, doesn't mean it's not the "best program on the block." In fact, it is one of the best. C/c: I think you should make the "dragon longsword" look more like a sword and less like a stocking/leg/sock. The big, blue blob in the top left corner looks just like that. A big, blue blob. By the way, did you wake up this morning saying to yourself, "I think I'm going to post a crappy signature that everyone can flame." Well, the good thing is, there is no way it was ripped.

I only insulted it because you went and insulted every MSPaint'er by claiming your sig only sucks because you made it in paint. Oh, how mature.

Why is there a red leg to the right side of the page? :-s PS: Paint's not the reason why it sucks. :wink:

Wow how'd you figure that out?[/sarcasm] Thats like saying Waterbirth Island is surronded by water. It is??

You ripped that avatar and added some crappy lines to it, in case you didn't know. It's sp4de's avatar, not yours. And, please, for the love of God, quit typing in all caps!

The green is a bit bright to me, it's irritating my headache. DEFINATELY work on your cropping. The random blue and red everywhere is a bit distracting, much like the text streaming over your render. Darken the green a bit so that some of us can save our aspirin for another day, and get rid of that text in the middle. I personally don't like it, because 1) I don't like conker or whatever his name is 2) I absolutely hate neon (-ish) green and 3) The whole matrix thing going on is lame in my opinion. (^that is just my opinion, so no one flame me for it. I don't know how I would get flamed for it, but I'm sure someone would find a way. Trust me, this week is chock-full of finals, I don't want unwanted stress in any shape or form..)

Yup, gave one of my friends full Guthix, though she almost didn't accept it.. :?

On the bottom of her dress, what you can see makes it seem like it doesn't go back down in the front, like with the back. I think that makes a ltitle more sense.

Trust me, I've seen worse. :lol: It doesn't look that 3-D, but it's not too too bad for your first. But, if you think it's bad, you should fix what you figure is bad, then post it ONLY when you like it. "if you think it is bad, it IS" :P

Lol, nice try to get people on the TIF to give better C/c but I'm not sure if they'll listen. :? I'm not going to C/c this for no reason except to test my skills, sorry to disappoint you. :)

The font with the second one seems too girly compared to the render, lol. The font needs to be more suspenseful or eerie, in my opinion. Also, it's a bit hard to read. On the border with the second, it kind of just cuts off on the top right, which makes it look blah.

Great C/c, good job =D> The perspective seems okay, but the doors are pointed too far down in my opinion. They need a little less of an angle on them and that should look better.

You couldn't even spend the time to trace it??

Amazing, but please, Please, PLEASE fix the feet! They are driving me nuts! Babies feet aren't even that small!! :wall: Btw, I say have an entangle in progress, not like the last where it already reached the guy. Either that or move the hand in a different position, it looks bad like it is.

I really like it. The colors chosen on this piece go with it, in my opinion. The over-bright part of it just goes with it. :) Looks good, now..GO MAKE A NEW WAllPAPER!!! :evil:

The hat doesn't even look attached to the body and her right arm is really odd-looking. It's too long, I think is the problem. The hat really is the biggest problem you have, it just doesn't fit with the body, almost like it's behind her.