The tree branches are a little off and the ice burst is too like the same on both sides and might need some more shading with darkness of some one in it, also I need to add a little guy in half burst mode some where in it. I also need to make texture on the ground, to make it look like a ground.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think its ok for my first, I spend about 20-30 mins of so on it, I am sure I could almost get it perfect if I spend alot of time on it I just wanted to see if its starting to look good.

The theme is very unoriginal but good for a first.

 

 

 

It is kinda hard to see what is going on, it is just a block of ice, not like someone sees a block of ice everyday for no reason, so like make a person in the background with an ancient staff holding it up like he is casting ice barrage

 

 

 

Make the ground a different color, it blends with the sky and I couldn't see it at first

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7/10 for a first, Good job :wink:

Yea the tree wasn't suppose to be there I just desided to put it in, I might make one where instead of a block of ice its a guy casting ice burst then maybe, maybe If I like it alot make 2 other pictures one with a guy stating there and one with him frozen then get it animated so it looks like the guy is freezing him.

Yea that would be cool, or you could make like arms and legs coming out of the ice (to look like the guy was running towards me or outwards)

looks pretty good to me =p. i am gonna try to make my sig a little better. that is my first, it took me like an hour maybe. but yeah, work on that. 7/10.

Not bad, just the ice...it looks a little to "icey" if you know what I mean. Try to make it maybe a little softer because Ice Burst is really like a pile of snow. Also if you made it look more like someone was getting bursted it would look better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7/10

I'll probley fool around with this in another hour or so but I got 7.3k alchemys to do before tomarrow at noon to get me 70 magic so yea...

looks pretty good to me =p. i am gonna try to make my sig a little better. that is my first, it took me like an hour maybe. but yeah, work on that. 7/10.

 

 

 

please be joking....

I think its nice for a first atempt, just keep in mind that the sky isn't usually pitch black, id expect the tree to be a silhouette. I made a mega quick edit to suggest how i'd tackle ice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope id helps atall.. make sure your colours arent too saturated.

A "mega quick edit" huh? there are a few ppl (like me) who would take hours to do that kind of pic

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

regarding the avatar, i think its good. i havent tried pixel (ill do it soon) but my first pic wouldnt be as good

i know lol

 

 

 

terley thats pretty awesome

 

 

 

when i saw mega quick edit i was looking for the one close to thet that he did

 

 

 

then i realised you made a almost completely new one

I think its nice for a first atempt, just keep in mind that the sky isn't usually pitch black, id expect the tree to be a silhouette. I made a mega quick edit to suggest how i'd tackle ice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope id helps atall.. make sure your colours arent too saturated.

.....thats a....quick edit >.<................. #-o I suck :cry:

 

I think its nice for a first atempt, just keep in mind that the sky isn't usually pitch black, id expect the tree to be a silhouette. I made a mega quick edit to suggest how i'd tackle ice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope id helps atall.. make sure your colours arent too saturated.

.....thats a....quick edit >.<................. #-o I suck :cry:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hehe, hardly, but Terley is teh sheet.