Captainkidd Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 The tree branches are a little off and the ice burst is too like the same on both sides and might need some more shading with darkness of some one in it, also I need to add a little guy in half burst mode some where in it. I also need to make texture on the ground, to make it look like a ground. I think its ok for my first, I spend about 20-30 mins of so on it, I am sure I could almost get it perfect if I spend alot of time on it I just wanted to see if its starting to look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaownage Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 The theme is very unoriginal but good for a first. It is kinda hard to see what is going on, it is just a block of ice, not like someone sees a block of ice everyday for no reason, so like make a person in the background with an ancient staff holding it up like he is casting ice barrage Make the ground a different color, it blends with the sky and I couldn't see it at first 7/10 for a first, Good job :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captainkidd Posted March 18, 2007 Author Share Posted March 18, 2007 Yea the tree wasn't suppose to be there I just desided to put it in, I might make one where instead of a block of ice its a guy casting ice burst then maybe, maybe If I like it alot make 2 other pictures one with a guy stating there and one with him frozen then get it animated so it looks like the guy is freezing him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaownage Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 Yea that would be cool, or you could make like arms and legs coming out of the ice (to look like the guy was running towards me or outwards) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_god_of_soup Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 looks pretty good to me =p. i am gonna try to make my sig a little better. that is my first, it took me like an hour maybe. but yeah, work on that. 7/10. The spelling and grammar of that email was that of an 11 year old palestinian goatboy who is speaking english for the first timeQuite simply, Facebook craps on Myspace. Then makes it eat the crap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sk8_tolivv Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 Not bad, just the ice...it looks a little to "icey" if you know what I mean. Try to make it maybe a little softer because Ice Burst is really like a pile of snow. Also if you made it look more like someone was getting bursted it would look better. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captainkidd Posted March 18, 2007 Author Share Posted March 18, 2007 I'll probley fool around with this in another hour or so but I got 7.3k alchemys to do before tomarrow at noon to get me 70 magic so yea... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 looks pretty good to me =p. i am gonna try to make my sig a little better. that is my first, it took me like an hour maybe. but yeah, work on that. 7/10. please be joking.... Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 I think its nice for a first atempt, just keep in mind that the sky isn't usually pitch black, id expect the tree to be a silhouette. I made a mega quick edit to suggest how i'd tackle ice. hope id helps atall.. make sure your colours arent too saturated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeonardMart Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 A "mega quick edit" huh? there are a few ppl (like me) who would take hours to do that kind of pic regarding the avatar, i think its good. i havent tried pixel (ill do it soon) but my first pic wouldnt be as good Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jepa69 Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 i know lol terley thats pretty awesome when i saw mega quick edit i was looking for the one close to thet that he did then i realised you made a almost completely new one At the moment i can't really see the full form of the muffin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captainkidd Posted March 21, 2007 Author Share Posted March 21, 2007 I think its nice for a first atempt, just keep in mind that the sky isn't usually pitch black, id expect the tree to be a silhouette. I made a mega quick edit to suggest how i'd tackle ice. hope id helps atall.. make sure your colours arent too saturated......thats a....quick edit >.<................. #-o I suck :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korla Posted March 21, 2007 Share Posted March 21, 2007 I think its nice for a first atempt, just keep in mind that the sky isn't usually pitch black, id expect the tree to be a silhouette. I made a mega quick edit to suggest how i'd tackle ice. hope id helps atall.. make sure your colours arent too saturated......thats a....quick edit >.<................. #-o I suck :cry: Hehe, hardly, but Terley is teh sheet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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