April 4, 200719 yr Could of spent abit more time if you want improvement on such things as the ammy (Something people seem to complain about being too thin, too fat etc alot), work with shading and the effect your trying to accomplish in the picture. The light source I'm going to assume would be coming from the magic so yeah you get the idea, maybe work abit more with the background too (Stars and whatever else). 99 / 99 Mining 89 / 99 Smithing 87 / 90 Strength SKILL TOTAL: 1836 / 2000
April 4, 200719 yr that magic blast doesnt fit with the style of the pic and the background is too empty and too dark Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay!
April 4, 200719 yr would look much better without the ball + sparks coming off it IMO. looks like a wooden figure jumping about without it My photobucket
April 4, 200719 yr I think it looks pretty good for a start. It does need shading and all, but its a big step in the right way. To improve it, read some shading tutorials at the Gallery FAQ. :wink: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
April 4, 200719 yr the staff is to zig-zag and his hands are circles needs anatomy and shadding but again a step in the right direction =D>
April 4, 200719 yr well maybe he doesnt want to make a pixel, maybe more cartoon-like so i dont think that shading is needed Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay!
April 4, 200719 yr Yes. I am useless at paint....I give you. 8 out of...??? 10 Yes. It's not about the other people, its about shooting cute furry things that explode. I sincerely hate any-one who replies to a quote in their signature.Amen to that! Preach it brother!
April 4, 200719 yr I think that this has potential. Things to improve on: - There are spots that haven't been coloured. - The magic blast thing needs to be redone to fit with the style (I can't think off the top of my head how it should look, maybe some trial and error...). - The staff, should be smoother, as just about everything else in the picture is quite smooth. - The bottom half of the amulet seems to square off. - I think it should be shaded, although I think only one other shade should be used (similar to the way only one shade is used for shadow on the guy's face). - somthing in the background maybe (stars, moon, trees, that kinda thing). At the moment I would give it a 5/10
April 6, 200719 yr No shading... At all. Also, the electric ball seems to be... just, no. 1/10 no shading? little shading* My photobucket
April 6, 200719 yr I would add some stuff to the backround, but overall not bad 6/10. "Nobody cheers for Goliath" ~Wilt Chamberlain~
April 6, 200719 yr whats with the ground there is o n graass .... no detal? it could use some work but it isnt that bad. Sir Erderik thanks for the avatar.
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