ThruItAll Posted April 28, 2007 Share Posted April 28, 2007 There once was a pker named Smith, Who beared a scimitar and 2h of mith, Once he went into the wilderness, He attacked a tank pure with confidence, If he was winning he wasnt sure, But it was too much for the tank to endure, The tank had good defence and hit low, But Smith ignored it and produced the finishing blow. LOL, It's BAD danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haddman Posted April 28, 2007 Share Posted April 28, 2007 LOL, It's BADYea it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mario_sunny Posted April 28, 2007 Share Posted April 28, 2007 LOL, It's BADYea it is. I think it was a very nice short poem. :) By popular demand, this signature is back- however I currently do not have a blog up at the moment and if I did I wouldn't update it. Sorry, the sig links to nowhere :( . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted April 28, 2007 Share Posted April 28, 2007 There once was a pk'er named Smith, Who bore a 2-hander of mith, He went into the wilderness, Attacked a Tank Pure with confidence. If he was winning he wasn't too sure, T'was too much for the Tank to endure, The Tank had good defence and hit low, But Smith ignored it and dealt the finished blow. Just revised it and made it flow easier. Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Continuum Posted April 29, 2007 Share Posted April 29, 2007 ...Mith? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted April 29, 2007 Author Share Posted April 29, 2007 Rofl... I think that was my bro, I have my tif acc on remember :oops: danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recksash Posted May 8, 2007 Share Posted May 8, 2007 Not too bad =p But I don't think wilderness and confidence rhyme... But yeah, try to improve the flow, otherwise its pretty good. Politics,n. Strife of interests masquerading as a conflict of principles. -Ambrose BierceBarrow drops:Verac's Helm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted May 10, 2007 Share Posted May 10, 2007 I think those two lines still work because they use iambic quartameter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
homegirl911911999 Posted May 17, 2007 Share Posted May 17, 2007 okay someone needs to go back and try again just kidding it was just fine besides the fact i think pking is for stupid runescape users who have nothing better to do. oh and i hate pking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powerent Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 Nice poem. You think you could make another one with a different subject? You have no idea how powerful words are....until they hit you in the head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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