Well, my goal in this was to realy make a cool, funky atmosphere :D Well i came up with a very nice one, and then sent the result to azvareth. He quickly did his magic, making the peice a lot more strange looking (hence the name :P) i do realize beacuse of the atmosphere, the landscape didn't get as much credit as it should. there realy is a nice surface map to be shown, but meh lol :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, here it is.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you gone done it again! :shock: you and az did a pheonomenal job here.

I do not know how to make terragans but, I like it... Theres a few thing's that dont look right to me.... What is in the picture below... also the bottom of it I dont like, maybe make it smaller?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh yeah, not the mountain in the red circle, i mean everything around that piece...

yeah, terragen has a nasty habit of doing shadows badly. :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks guys.

Could be good..but..I think it'd look a lot better if you..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Loose the border, and the text, they both aren't very good and don't fit the peice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Make it just a long horizontal peice, crop it down to just the mountains and the clouds.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Remove the strange knub thing in the middle of the main mountain..

What the hell dude! You posted it!

 

 

 

Everything I did just ruined it, and I told you that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Grrr 2 u. :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And to everyone who says it looks good, you're wrong.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*writes suicide letter*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

What the hell dude! You posted it!

 

 

 

Everything I did just ruined it, and I told you that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Grrr 2 u. :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And to everyone who says it looks good, you're wrong.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*writes suicide letter*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*grins*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Er, as already said, some bits look off, otherwise, it looks pretty alright, dont really like the text though. :P

Uh... btw... maybe you should exclude "kopiera", since it's the swedish word for "copy"... and since I made a copy of it, well... you get the idea. Not meant to be there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It made me go roffelraisins when I saw it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

The big nub thing in the center of that mountain makes it look like it's happy to see me. :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, aside from the sexual joke, I really like the atmosphere on this one. It's really mysterious and... interesting, to say the least. 9/10.

That mountain thing is like out of Paper Mario :S. The sky is the only thing I like. When you come to the foreground it looks so pixely where the ground is. The specks of green are so ...blech.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Try again, bud. You can do better.

Uh... btw... maybe you should exclude "kopiera", since it's the swedish word for "copy"... and since I made a copy of it, well... you get the idea. Not meant to be there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It made me go roffelraisins when I saw it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ah... oh well, you guys can forget about this one :oops: :oops: :oops:

 

Uh... btw... maybe you should exclude "kopiera", since it's the swedish word for "copy"... and since I made a copy of it, well... you get the idea. Not meant to be there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It made me go roffelraisins when I saw it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ah... oh well, you guys can forget about this one :oops: :oops: :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Got a post-Photoshop picture of it? Just the render. Looks like it's got some kind of motion blur over it. Looks like it good be pretty nice without the post process work.

Uh... btw... maybe you should exclude "kopiera", since it's the swedish word for "copy"... and since I made a copy of it, well... you get the idea. Not meant to be there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It made me go roffelraisins when I saw it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

RullarpÃÆÃâÃâÃÂ¥golvetochskrattarrussing.

 

 

 

Funny if your swedish.

I don't want to discourage you. But I think it's a pretty bad piece. Looks blurry and low quality, the central mountain looks stuffed and the overall composition is nothing to celebrate about. You should forget about this piece and redeem yourself with a new one.

 

 

Uh... btw... maybe you should exclude "kopiera", since it's the swedish word for "copy"... and since I made a copy of it, well... you get the idea. Not meant to be there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It made me go roffelraisins when I saw it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ah... oh well, you guys can forget about this one :oops: :oops: :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Got a post-Photoshop picture of it? Just the render. Looks like it's got some kind of motion blur over it. Looks like it good be pretty nice without the post process work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah i have a post render i might just post instead of this. It was mostly just an expiriment.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Froth, Don't worry you wont. I'll post the non photoshoped version in a bit :wink:

 

Uh... btw... maybe you should exclude "kopiera", since it's the swedish word for "copy"... and since I made a copy of it, well... you get the idea. Not meant to be there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It made me go roffelraisins when I saw it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

RullarpÃÆÃâÃâÃÂ¥golvetochskrattarrussing.

 

 

 

Funny if your swedish.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ahahaha :D lose the g on the end for more correctness, though ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway, not your best guys. but that's already been said, so i'll just go back to where i came from...[/b]

 

 

Uh... btw... maybe you should exclude "kopiera", since it's the swedish word for "copy"... and since I made a copy of it, well... you get the idea. Not meant to be there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It made me go roffelraisins when I saw it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

RullarpÃÆÃâÃâÃÂ¥golvetochskrattarrussing.

 

 

 

Funny if your swedish.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ahahaha :D lose the g on the end for more correctness, though ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway, not your best guys. but that's already been said, so i'll just go back to where i came from...[/b]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rendering a preview of a MUCH better landscape with the same type of atmosphere. When i'm done i'll post it and the basic render for this peice here.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Trust me, its gunna be so much better :shock: Perhaps one of my bests?