Constructive Criticism, please. again, im not done and this IS my FIRST real pixel sig. Tryin to figure out what else to put in the background, so suggestons are welcome.

Nice sig Jab, thats awesome for your first pure pixel :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe some trees or mountains in the background (yes it's very boring but couldnt think of anything else :roll: )

more animals, a girrafe maybe, a rock or two in the stream, uhh maybe some shadows of fish in the stream...hmmm thats all i can think of right now

Flower garden, and maybe some fish jumping out of the water?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe you could reposition things and put a waterfall in... Naa forget I said that, way too much work :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well done BTW, it looks great :)

Flower garden, and maybe some fish jumping out of the water?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe you could reposition things and put a waterfall in... Naa forget I said that, way too much work :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well done BTW, it looks great :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hmm the waterfall is a nice idea. ill try that, cuz i really hate the background right now :(

Like the sig, Brilliant. Add some things to the background. Make it all packed it, so it doesn't look bare. And should look better.

Another suggestion - consider changing the animals. It's pretty rare to find an elephant, rabbit, and a bird all in the same place!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Perhaps turn the bird into a parrot and have it on the girls shoulder. The way it is right now, it looks like it's sitting on the rock, however the shadow position for it contradicts that. The rock also needs a shadow, unless it's magical and doesn't cast a shadow :P.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe change the rabbit into a small jungle animal, perhaps some type of lizzard? That would make the elephant, parrot, and rabbit->lizard all jungle creatures :)

Another suggestion - consider changing the animals. It's pretty rare to find an elephant, rabbit, and a bird all in the same place!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Perhaps turn the bird into a parrot and have it on the girls shoulder. The way it is right now, it looks like it's sitting on the rock, however the shadow position for it contradicts that. The rock also needs a shadow, unless it's magical and doesn't cast a shadow :P.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe change the rabbit into a small jungle animal, perhaps some type of lizzard? That would make the elephant, parrot, and rabbit->lizard all jungle creatures :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well she wanted a parakeet, bunny, elephant, and a giraffe.....so thats what i tried to do

Maybe something runescape related? Sorry, I just don't see anything that you would see in RS, accept a bunny...

not evryone wants runescape related sigs....

I was assuming it was for RS though....

not evryone wants runescape related sigs....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i hate doing rs sigs :roll: :)

 

Another suggestion - consider changing the animals. It's pretty rare to find an elephant, rabbit, and a bird all in the same place!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Perhaps turn the bird into a parrot and have it on the girls shoulder. The way it is right now, it looks like it's sitting on the rock, however the shadow position for it contradicts that. The rock also needs a shadow, unless it's magical and doesn't cast a shadow :P.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe change the rabbit into a small jungle animal, perhaps some type of lizzard? That would make the elephant, parrot, and rabbit->lizard all jungle creatures :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well she wanted a parakeet, bunny, elephant, and a giraffe.....so thats what i tried to do

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ah okie, I didn't know that :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe just fix the bird/rock shadow thing in the final version, it looks a little off to me :)

Maybe something runescape related? Sorry, I just don't see anything that you would see in RS, accept a bunny...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

since when does everything has to be rs related?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and why doesnt anyone notice the mouse..

 

 

 

great sig so far i really love the elephant

 

 

 

nice sig great job so far

yea theyre quite monotonous...and not very interesting

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"I want an archer shooting a guy in full rune in the back while hes running"

 

 

 

or

 

 

 

"I want a guy at the rune rocks with a dead body with a pick in his head beside him"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

after a while those scenes get boring

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT : i thought that was a gerbil :( o well lol)

Yeah, ok, sorry.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I didin't mean to offend anyone, the sig is awesome for a first pixel sig.

yea theyre quite monotonous...and not very interesting

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"I want an archer shooting a guy in full rune in the back while hes running"

 

 

 

or

 

 

 

"I want a guy at the rune rocks with a dead body with a pick in his head beside him"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

after a while those scenes get boring

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT : i thought that was a gerbil :( o well lol)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

actually, it IS a gerbil. and ehm, lunchbox its cool, you didnt offend me. its all good. i just like bein different....eccentric if thats the right word :? :P

Another suggestion - consider changing the animals. It's pretty rare to find an elephant, rabbit, and a bird all in the same place!

 

 

 

the zoo... btw great sig jab

 

Another suggestion - consider changing the animals. It's pretty rare to find an elephant, rabbit, and a bird all in the same place!

 

 

 

the zoo... btw great sig jab

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ahh good point... Sorry, I haven't been to a zoo since I was like 4 :oops:

Cuuuute gerbil! :D

4 words..... that girl is hot....

4 words..... that girl is hot....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You think Pixels are hot? Gross :?

O.o

Also that GIRL is supposta be me. And the only hot pixels is that suuper cute gerbil!