i know the lines are a tad thick in places, theres some corections still to be made but despite that i want some decent advice =) and yes, i purposely did simple shading, its meant to be more cartoonish than realistic

 

 

 

technically it's not very good, but I like it.

I personally like it, but it's kinda stiff, maybe make it look like it can move. Good try though.

 

Btw, I can't do this myself, think it's very good. Don't think I'm critisising you. :wink:

 

Good job!

for a cartoon i like it, but as the guy above said it is a little stiff

technically it's not very good, but I like it.

 

 

 

would you like to elaborate?

Gib the poor bugger some knees :o!

 

 

 

Anyway, very nice. Much better than anything I could ever do.

technically it's not very good, but I like it.

 

 

 

would you like to elaborate?

 

I know you mentioned it, but the thick lines, shading is off in some areas. If it's meant to be a cartoon pixel then shading where there is is good, but theres shading lacking in areas.

 

The anatomy needs some fixing even for cartoon, but i don't have time to go into it now, i have to go.

k ill work on that in the future, human anatomy seems to crush me in terms of drawing

well, i like it, but it could use MUCH more detail ne everything, keep working on it, putting detail in, it will turn out nice

I think you did a great job, especially to be working in MS Paint. I'm terrible when it comes to the art-type things, you did a nice job though. :D

I like it a lot , however a lot of those lines are of centre which

 

puts it off of course :lol: . The face/coif needs a lot more work

 

same story with the but of the cross bow. Generally just tidy it up

 

a bit very good for MS paint.

 

 

 

Gib the poor bugger some knees :o!

 

 

 

 

that too :uhh:

The main Problems IMO are:

 

 

 

The legs need to be tanner.

 

His legs are dead straight, maybe make them slightly bent like hes playing golf.

 

 

 

Very nice otherwise! good job!

you did that in MSpaint? holy crap :shock:

 

 

 

thats really good :)

LOL. Atleast someone nows how to draw on mspaint. Nice job and keep it up. :thumbsup:

The feet seem too small, he needs knees and his hands look a tad odd. I like the style you have done everything in, just as said above could use some fixing up in a few areas. I am not all that great with shading, so I won't give you any criticism there, just the anatomy part of it could help alot.

THe majority of people seem to believe that ms paint is a amazingly hard program to use. It is not, Pixeling something simple like this, no offence, is fairly easy, so please, don't say "omg is that in paint, thats sooooooo good for paint. I think you need to look at some really good pixels (no offence again, i like this but it isn't amazing) faelenof and misterxman's sigs are both done in paint, and those are two really nce and easy accesible ones

:XD: Well like a lot of people said it's a little stiff. Try and fix the face tan. His legs and hands are pail and then face is tan. Make the legs hands darker :thumbsup: Otherwise its not bad. I'm posting my very first MS Paint sketch. It's not even Runescape.