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You spent time adding in a large amount of of shading except there is no evidence of what direction of where the light is actually coming from. you have not built the structure before detailing , some things i can notice which are wrong

 

 

 

-Shadow cast over the magicians face

 

-Posision of feet not inline with robe bottom

 

-Very short arms and the fingers are a bit...

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All of them are pillow shaded, if shaded at all, because you don't have a light source.

 

 

 

-No fingers.

 

-Feet look very ...bendy.

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what do you mean it won't let you save as PNG in paint?!

 

You can save as PNG in MS paint. theres a drop down menu where you can save as PNG. Here's a screenshot of me saving as PNG in MS paint.

 

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If its not there I don't know what else to do... :wall:

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okay, i am going to be brutally honest, dont let this stop you from soing art, but

 

 

 

you have no artistic talent

 

 

 

- you dont show a light source

 

- the drawings themselves are not good

 

- the "shading" you do, it way to choppy and not smooth

 

- your detail, well, isnt really there

 

- and all of them look like you did them in a hurry

 

- your work is sloppy

 

 

 

 

 

Im sorry, it had to be said, DONT let this stop you from doing art, you just have to improve okay? just work at it and you will get better, look at examples and do your best, and put more time into thjem

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Ya, wonka, all of us have stuff to work on. for you its detail, for Yaff2 its spelling :mrgreen:

 

Im sorry, it had to be said, DONT let this stop you from doing art, you just have to improve okay? just work at it and you will get better, look at examples and do your best, and put more time into thjem

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Ya, wonka, all of us have stuff to work on. for you its detail, for Yaff2 its spelling :mrgreen:

 

Im sorry, it had to be said, DONT let this stop you from doing art, you just have to improve okay? just work at it and you will get better, look at examples and do your best, and put more time into thjem

 

 

 

oh [bleep]ing no, i hit a letter by accident you dumb [bleep], i was trying to help him, not be a [bleep]ing jerk, now you have gone and pissed me off, you [cabbage] [bleep]er

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Ya, wonka, all of us have stuff to work on. for you its detail, for Yaff2 its spelling :mrgreen:

 

Im sorry, it had to be said, DONT let this stop you from doing art, you just have to improve okay? just work at it and you will get better, look at examples and do your best, and put more time into thjem

 

 

 

oh [bleep] no, i hit a letter by accident you dumb [bleep], i was trying to help him, not be a [bleep] jerk, now you have gone and pissed me off, you [cabbage] [bleep]

 

 

 

Woah woah woah, let's all calm down here. Yaff, swearing, quite honestly, doesn't get you anywhere and that's really not much of an excuse to flame someone. :?

 

 

 

Onto the crits:

 

- Bigger is not always better. Downsize your canvases and crop unnecessary white space.

 

- As someone said above, don't save pixels as .jpgs, and you can save them as .pngs in paint.

 

- Read up on human anatomy over the internet. We've got tons of resources there. Use them.

 

 

 

The best thing you can do for yourself right now, in this stage of your art, is to read tutorials. Read, read, read, try stuff, read again, try more stuff, and so on and so forth.

 

 

 

Best of luck.

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I think the censored cussing might've been playful sarcasm.

 

 

 

To artist: You might want to do several things to improve.

 

 

 

1. Learn basic art technique and theory

 

2. Learn basic human anatomy

 

3. Learn how to use computer image program things to improve your art's quality.

 

 

 

I'm not sure how you could find #1 and 2, but it would help you a lot.

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I think the censored cussing might've been playful sarcasm.

 

 

 

To artist: You might want to do several things to improve.

 

 

 

1. Learn basic art technique and theory

 

2. Learn basic human anatomy

 

3. Learn how to use computer image program things to improve your art's quality.

 

 

 

I'm not sure how you could find #1 and 2, but it would help you a lot.

 

 

 

It really wasnt, that comment made pissed me off

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