I'm still trying to improve on surface maps, but I thought this came out nicely, so I touched it up a little...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Constructive criticism is welcome.

the atmosphere seems weird and there is n water... :?

the landscape is like this ___

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but the water is like this \

 

 

 

It makes it look weird.

wow it looks much better in full view.. EVERYONE FULL VIEW! and still tha angle is bad with no water and all.. and still no water! lol

The water's there, it's just really dark. You can see it close to the shore, but you will have to look closely. I think the light reflections near the bottom right corner give it away as well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, I quite like the dark look to the water.

i saw it towards the shore..hmm im gonna try a beach now..youve iinspired me!

It somehow reminds me of Tekken 2, not sure if it's good or bad. :P

Looks more like the camera is half sunken in the water, since the only visible water effects are on the topmost area, by the shore. Imo you should take away the "rainy" effect from the dark waters and add something like a shark popping out the darkness....could be cool imo...very cool..

just me or is the water covered by black.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sky looks weird.

move the camera up so its facing more down on the land and change the transperant water color to a lighter color and the darker non transperant to a dark grayish brown... or just use the tropical and deep water default settting thing way u wont see just black water as if its unfinished and needed more layers... however i like what u done with the sky its a nice pretty original idea kinda gives me an otherworlderly feeling

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

fix those problems and its a 8/10