It is a work in progress, but before I move on I want to see where people think I can improve and what not.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

shade the rest like you did the legs. you should almost never put the focus in the center of and image(kills composition). and your characters pose is very stiff

Hey before I go to bed :D ... its the arms that makes it look weird atm, and you might wanna add more definition into the body (Chest and stomach) .. Maybe a bigger shield. Hope you finish the shading sucessfully.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Terley

Yea I'm gonna finish the shading, thanks for the suggestions.

I like the backround, maybe put a few bones and skulls somewhere there in the back? Just an idea. Anyway, the shield is WAY too small, and what type of sword is that? Also the head is a little disproportionate (too big). And as hiddel said, you should put the guy a little more on the side (maybe the left side and put your name and stats on the right) Hope this helps

I like the backround, maybe put a few bones and skulls somewhere there in the back? Just an idea. Anyway, the shield is WAY too small, and what type of sword is that? Also the head is a little disproportionate (too big). And as hiddel said, you should put the guy a little more on the side (maybe the left side and put your name and stats on the right) Hope this helps

 

 

 

It's a crystal dagger

the shield is way too small!

maybe im just picky, but the legs look funny........it looks to me like you're wearing a rune plate leotard. the dragon leggs should be like pants. right now they look more like tights since tehre is no point where they go around your waist, if you know what i mean.......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but otherwise, great job. the shading on the legs is great.

maybe im just picky, but the legs look funny........it looks to me like you're wearing a rune plate leotard. the dragon leggs should be like pants. right now they look more like tights since tehre is no point where they go around your waist, if you know what i mean.......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but otherwise, great job. the shading on the legs is great.

 

 

 

I know what you mean, I'll try and see if the shading helps that at all :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll finish shading tonight and repost.

the face scares me the most... >: |

 

 

 

.............................................. ^rawr

 

I like the backround, maybe put a few bones and skulls somewhere there in the back? Just an idea. Anyway, the shield is WAY too small, and what type of sword is that? Also the head is a little disproportionate (too big). And as hiddel said, you should put the guy a little more on the side (maybe the left side and put your name and stats on the right) Hope this helps

 

 

 

It's a crystal dagger

 

 

 

In that case make it a little shorter and thinner and give it a little bit of a blue tinge.(sp?) In other words give it a bit of a blue colour because atm it looks more like a steel sword

Shield is too small, you got lazy and didnt do the same shading as legs, but... the guys pose is unreal...

Legs start too high up.. Move them down..

Better than your other drawing i must say. There is no point to where the...plate legs meet...is he a unic? that's the point i'm trying to make anyways :lol: Make shield bigger, and good job on the face! Better than the bloodshot eyes of the past. Shade all of it, make the legs bigger, and shade the bg a lil and you'll have a very good sig.

the legs should have a top to them. cos your trousers arent just things to cover your legs...... they also have another section. the same applys with plate legs.