this is my 2nd sig

 

i call it working together

 

 

 

 

 

this is what i got so far:

 

 

 

 

 

 

ive retouched the lines

 

 

 

 

 

 

added some colour

 

 

 

 

 

 

added more colour

 

 

 

 

even more colour

 

 

 

 

 

 

finished

 

 

 

IT looks okay for the most part. THe linework is skrewed up in a few places though. Make sure the piexels don't overlap. Also don't save as a Jpeg it totally kills pixels.

eeew jpeg

 

its ok

 

clean your linework before coloring

sorted the lines out

aadddeeddd colour

I like the mage, but the was seems a little flat.

 

 

 

8 kittens out of 10 on the mage

*gasp* 0_o

 

 

 

It's a nice sig, not bad at all so far.. The bow looks a bit awkward though..

 

 

 

7/10

added more colour

tree is commin along great, accept dont forget the sparkles, as it is a mage tree

Really like it so far!

 

The tree looks great!

finished it

 

 

 

final sig

 

 

 

I like your style. Just make your lines cleaner...and is that a few white dots I see on a tree?

 

 

 

9 kittens out of 10

oh noes i forgot the tree >:| ill update it but i wont repost an update pic just for white dots

 

 

 

and how can i make my line even neater, i check all of them and all of the are streight lines not joined

oh noes i forgot the tree >:| ill update it but i wont repost an update pic just for white dots

 

 

 

and how can i make my line even neater, i check all of them and all of the are streight lines not joined

 

 

 

You'll want to use diagonal corners over square ones.. Also, try to make your line straight..

Wow I love it! Although there are a few bits that could use a bit more shading and such, but I really like the result, I like the simpleness of some of it, where detail isn't really used, it gives a nice look. Well done, 9/10

Add shadows to the ground. Add texture mostly to the grass that seems too flat.

thank you very much for the help guys

The finished copy looks really nice gratz.

 

What program did u use?

MS paint

I feel sorry for the full dragonguy, did he lose his legs in some fatal accident? And this is christmas =(. Its times like these that I am feeling remorse for supporting the children in africa instead of this guy.

 

 

 

And Ive never liked the way magic logs looked nowadays, they look like candycones :? .

 

 

 

Its a good sig, but it needs more depth and contrast. And the dragon guy needs a wheelchair, or legs.

Flat but i love the tree work, very nice ^^

 

 

 

8/10

That's really an awesome pixel. I don't like the sky, though. Maybe darken it? Or even a night sky would look really cool.