please rate it and tell me what i could do to make it better

clouds or ufo's?

 

 

 

and the trees are all the same, even the ones in the distance

 

 

 

perspective is a bit fubared

ive seen the original and this is a HUGE improvement! great job except... the text and border colors should be a color that is found in the drawing or that blends with it.

ok thanks!

I like it, i dunno why but I prefer cartoon styles to normal figures.. it emphasises the expressions and actions more, plus you can be more original! I like this for that reason.. originality. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For some reason the sky shouldn't match with the guy and ground but it works, your gettin better..

I like it, i dunno why but I prefer cartoon styles to normal figures.. it emphasises the expressions and actions more, plus you can be more original! I like this for that reason.. originality. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For some reason the sky shouldn't match with the guy and ground but it works, your gettin better..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

cartoony pixels are everything but original on these boards.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

wel the ground is really iffy and the trees look copy and pasted + cropped rs Dead Trees.

 

 

 

draw your own trees and perhaps fix the ground?