AndyPandy Posted July 13, 2008 Share Posted July 13, 2008 Had a go at manipulating a stock I had. I was bored, so it's nothing serious. What do you think? How could I improve it? V2 (without text): V3 (sepia): ~Boo So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted July 13, 2008 Share Posted July 13, 2008 Kay,not a good manipulator myself,but from what I see its just one guy.That's hardly a war...The text doesn't match the rest of the pic to me... so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPandy Posted July 13, 2008 Author Share Posted July 13, 2008 How about I take off the text? ~Boo So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted July 13, 2008 Share Posted July 13, 2008 How about I take off the text? ~Boo Without the text it may be a little plain...I dunno. so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted July 13, 2008 Share Posted July 13, 2008 The edges are a bit distracting. I imagine it would look nice with a sepia filter or something. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted July 13, 2008 Share Posted July 13, 2008 The version without the text looks better IMO. I rather like the border and the 'old' feel, but the swirls at the top seem a bit out of place. Overall it's quite a simple manip, but it doesn't look bad. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
re4p3r1 Posted July 13, 2008 Share Posted July 13, 2008 i dont really like sepia and the whole thing feels empty, maybe put some effects in the background Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted July 13, 2008 Share Posted July 13, 2008 I'm not a huge fan of it. It seems a little plain, and empty. The sepia in my opinion is just ugly. I really don' like it. Overall i'd say around 6/10. YOu could maybe add some things to make it more exiting? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baconxl Posted July 14, 2008 Share Posted July 14, 2008 I like V2 better but as everyone else said it does need some more going on, I like the picture overall though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skull Posted July 14, 2008 Share Posted July 14, 2008 I think it would look better if you added something like a stain to it. Maybe a bloodstain on the upper left or something? It's good, but a little boring. [bleep] the law, they can eat my dick that's word to Pimp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPandy Posted July 15, 2008 Author Share Posted July 15, 2008 Any other comments? I want to get a final version to upload to dA. ~Boo So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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