Saq Prets's art. A ''bit'' of updates.

[Estonian dude]

Well, here come my best pieces. Rate or Hate. C&C please.

 

#1

 

#2

 

#3

 

Have a version of that without the hell raise text.

 

#4

 

That totally sucks.

 

#5

 

#6

 

1st stock pic. :oops:

 

#7 V1

 

V2

 

#8

 

This one was for SOTW 1.

 

 

 

I still am a noob. :oops:

 

If you point out any bad places, could you be so helpful and find me a tut to help me improve?

[Hugger_88]

Not half bad! Very nice, and I like the 1st one

[Promise]

Tbh...it doesn't look like you did much besides adding a C4D and a little bit of smuding. I know barely anything about smuding so don't take my word for it, just call it as i see it. If you want cc on smudging, talk to thru.

[Shiny]

If you want cc on smudging, talk to thru.

 

 

 

Or me! Or Little, julius, Soa (but he usually isn't around) or most other gallery regulars.

 

 

 

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OT: All I see is a picture, slapped on a white or black or other colour background, with a C4d just sitting behind. #3 is your best because you have experimented with colour and and smudging. Don't be afraid to branch out to other things like different smudge styles and the like.

 

 

 

For tuts, go to deviantart.com. You can also find fonts there, or dafont.com, and brush sets. For renders you to planetrenders.com

[Greatsilverwyrm]

I know barely anything about smuding so don't take my word for it, just call it as i see it.

 

 

 

What the hell? What's to know? That's like saying you know barely aothing about walking. You put one foot in front of the other and you move forward. That's all there is to it.

[Promise]

I know barely anything about smuding so don't take my word for it, just call it as i see it.

 

 

 

What the hell? What's to know? That's like saying you know barely aothing about walking. You put one foot in front of the other and you move forward. That's all there is to it.

 

 

 

 

 

Ok...smuding...good..ish.

[Greatsilverwyrm]

I know barely anything about smuding so don't take my word for it, just call it as i see it.

 

 

 

What the hell? What's to know? That's like saying you know barely aothing about walking. You put one foot in front of the other and you move forward. That's all there is to it.

 

 

 

 

 

Ok...smuding...good..ish.

 

 

 

Sorry, didn't mean to come off as a jerk. It's just very odd to me to hear "smudging" talked about like it's some whole seperate technique.

[Estonian dude]

Well, actually it is. You understand it when watching Littleboy's signatures.

 

 

 

And I think I should have learned a ''bit'' more before posting here, stupid me... :wall:

 

Well, I am now going to try some stock tags.

[ThruItAll]

Wanna colab? Make a base and I'll try to touch it up? So you can see how to make it look more appealing.

[Estonian dude]

Ok, but you should pick a render, I really suck at picking one.

[ThruItAll]

You're meant to focus on your work, that includes picking the right render. aka. I cba. I'll use any render.

[Estonian dude]

 

This is the collab base, remove the C4D and text. I have the .xcf saved without C4D and text.

 

This is actually what shiny said. Some brushing, some blurring, some smudging, and a C4D.

[Shiny]

Mind giving me the .xcf? I use gimp, so it isn't a prob. I'd like to see if I can do something, and i'll name it.

[ThruItAll]

 

Couldn't do much, you have to create flow, like I have done with the yellow and purple lines. Colour is a big issue, never use black. I use Orange, Pink, Green or Purple most. Smudging, I had to delete the smudging behind it, sorry. And canvas size. 380x140 is my max. This helps composition, which is something I need to work on.

[Estonian dude]

WOW! :shock:

 

This differs from my base like day and night.

 

GREAT! job thru, I could have never done something like this with that base.

[Estonian dude]

1st stock. :oops:

 

 

Even though it doesn't look much, I spent like 2 hours at least thinking, what I should do. Also erased, and totally redone image like 5-6 times.

[Sam]

The smudging just kills it IMO.

[Estonian dude]

The smudging on lines or on the guy?

[Estonian dude]

Sorry for no updates.

 

I haven't been a lot on computer, well need new C&C here since I have something new to show up.

[Grasle]

The Mario looks distorted, to me.

 

 

 

Also, on some of them, the backgrounds need some more crispness to them.

 

 

 

And one last bit, the text fonts need some work.

 

 

 

Still, there's some potential.

[yaff2]

I know barely anything about smuding so don't take my word for it, just call it as i see it.

 

 

 

What the hell? What's to know? That's like saying you know barely aothing about walking. You put one foot in front of the other and you move forward. That's all there is to it.

 

 

 

 

 

Ok...smuding...good..ish.

 

 

 

Sorry, didn't mean to come off as a jerk. It's just very odd to me to hear "smudging" talked about like it's some whole seperate technique.

 

 

 

not really, there are TONS of ways to smudge, some hard, some easy. some basic, some technical. its nothing like as you said, walking. there are different levels of smudging.