Jopie211 Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 1. V1 V2 2. V1 3. V1 V2 Minor changes. 4. V1 Smudge experiment, just comment on my new settings please. xD C/C, opinions, thoughts? pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 Smudging on the first could be a lot cleaner. The focal is hard to make out, which craps up the compo. 2nd is good, and 3rd is awesome. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Share Posted September 21, 2008 Thanks. :D EDIT: Registered on PR forums. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Estonian dude Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 1st sig yes, like Thru said is messy. Sprite should be seen a bit better. 2. is just wonderful. 3. the C4D on left is a bit too distracting IMO. So I've noticed this thread's regulars all follow similar trends. RPG is constantly dealing with psycho exes.Muggi reminds us of the joys of polygamy.Saq is totally oblivious to how much chicks dig him.I strike out every other week.Kalphite wages a war against the friend zone.Randox pretty much stays rational.Etc, etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Share Posted September 21, 2008 Thanks for the comment. :] pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 I agree with thru. For the first one I didn't realise it was a sprite till I squinted :-# . The second is fairly good, but still messy, and to me doesn't have particularly good flow. The third is very good. Good flow colours and lighting. The colours seem a bit washed out in places but overall it is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsavi Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 I really like the second one, the first good use of red I've seen really. The others flow well, but in the first one the render is blended too much/not visible enough. I registered on PR too, as dsavi. (Man I hate IP.Board :x ) Who else has an account there, can you say your usernames? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stilev Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 1 - i really not a fan of the overall hue of it 2 - 8-) < jopie 3 - the left side has a lot less detail then the render, and the hue again does work well with the hue of the render, render is vibrant, while the c4d is more pastel at lest on to the top left it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 I really like the second one, the first good use of red I've seen really. The others flow well, but in the first one the render is blended too much/not visible enough. I registered on PR too, as dsavi. (Man I hate IP.Board :x ) Who else has an account there, can you say your usernames? .thrallstar danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 22, 2008 Author Share Posted September 22, 2008 Yay moar posts. Thank you for the feedback guys, it's appreciated. I'll post a V2 of the third sig soon, and maybe of the first one too. Actually, I may turn this into a gallery. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grasle Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 The first - it's hard to tell what's going on. It's simple, then there's the messy, cluttered area. I like the second the best, except the text is too distracting for me (I could just be weird). Still, it's great. The third is nice. You did a good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 23, 2008 Author Share Posted September 23, 2008 ^ Thanks. :D The second one doesn't have actual text though, but there is a watermark on it so I guess that's what you were referring to? pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 24, 2008 Author Share Posted September 24, 2008 Updated. Added V2 of #3 and a weird new one. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 24, 2008 Share Posted September 24, 2008 Smudging text is bad. No want. off nao. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 24, 2008 Author Share Posted September 24, 2008 I know, I just put it on for fun, and it's only an experimental thingy anyway. What about the smudging itself though? pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 24, 2008 Share Posted September 24, 2008 Looks like Kyus, good but bad colour. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 24, 2008 Author Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ok, thanks. :mrgreen: pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted September 24, 2008 Share Posted September 24, 2008 Smudge setting for the last one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 24, 2008 Share Posted September 24, 2008 17 px rate 90, jitter 2.0? Spacing 1. I think ^^ danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 25, 2008 Author Share Posted September 25, 2008 ^ Nice guess, but not exactly. :P It's a brush called *star*#5 from this pack. Spacing 1, no jitter. Experiment with the other options. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 My smudge is that and looks exactly the same. :shock: danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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