AndyPandy Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 Can anyone give me some C/c on this? Some of you may recognise it as the sig I entered in Thru's tournament first round. I lost, so I want to know how to improve for my next sig. Can anyone help? So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 To be completely honest, the piece itself is quite ugly. The stock you used is kind of blurry, and doesn't really look good. The C4D doesm't flow with it, and looks like they were just placed on, and blended in. And the little blue dot's look quite weird with it too, they should be a different colour. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 Ouchy said it all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Estonian dude Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 What Ouchy said. Colors are ugly. No flow. Text is bad. So I've noticed this thread's regulars all follow similar trends. RPG is constantly dealing with psycho exes.Muggi reminds us of the joys of polygamy.Saq is totally oblivious to how much chicks dig him.I strike out every other week.Kalphite wages a war against the friend zone.Randox pretty much stays rational.Etc, etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 I dont like it. Too small, to messy, no composition. Centered and massive focal? wtf. Green doesnt go well to be honest.... C4Ds you tried to use look like complete [cabbage] tbh. The blue dots are decent. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPandy Posted November 4, 2008 Author Share Posted November 4, 2008 Okay, thanks, but how could I improve? So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 Looks at pro psds or tuts. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 No flow, lq stock & bad C4D. I'm wondering, do you use C4D's from PR gallery, or do you download C4D's? 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPandy Posted November 4, 2008 Author Share Posted November 4, 2008 For this I used the gallery, but I have now started downloading them. I've found they are much better quality, and you might see that in the sig I'm working on right now, I'll post a WIP now... EDIT: How can I improve this? So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted November 6, 2008 Share Posted November 6, 2008 Too much noise (Yesh I has the same problem), I would remove some of it (Note: Not all). The C4D doesn't blend well with the background and the focal (Also it's centered, what did Thru just tell you?), I would remove some larger parts of the C4D and try to blend it in to the background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 Background does not go with the foreground at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 Colours, background, noise and composition are pretty bad in the newer sig. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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