Derpy Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 Ok, this is my RS haiku! RuneScape is funny Lots of people play it now Free to play is nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 Its not that I hate you But its just one haiku Three short lines That hardly binds We'll want to see more,P.U. so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 Ought to be three short lines/that hardly bind But as dragoonson said, MOAR? sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 Ought to be three short lines/that hardly bind It needed to rhyme. so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncmd Posted November 19, 2008 Share Posted November 19, 2008 Now Kids, theres a moral to this story! ... Don't compete with a KOL player in a haiku contest! (PS, I liked the limmerick.) Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Music_In_Me4 Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 Hey I think it's pretty good. Although it doesn't rhyme it still follows the same 5,7,5 syllable stanzas and everybody's work is good. I believe that everything is perfect, it can use improving. I live by that day by day. Still awesome Haiku! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: ~MIN4 Music_In_Me4 Formally known as hsuth111 on TIF. The jerk who wiped out the boards can never stop us from being the most imaginative and creative people we all are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harakiri Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 your poems alright not the best haiku ever seen if you can try again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElkNight Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 your poems alright not the best haiku ever seen if you can try again? Better than the original :-# 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harakiri Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 ^^^ Thank you so much sir I wrote it in two minutes Really is easy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wongtong Posted November 27, 2008 Share Posted November 27, 2008 your poems alright not the best haiku ever seen if you can try again? That's not even going with the 5-7-5 syllable thing. Yours is 5-8-6 unless you pronounce words differently to me. Haikus are real cool Unless they are about games Including Runescape -.- 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoonson Posted December 1, 2008 Share Posted December 1, 2008 Please stop haiku-ing, You are bad against sir Jick's Kingdom of Loathing! so i herd u liek devarts?If you look at me and feel offended by my 666-ism,think.I could be just as offended by your "cross".[hide=This's why I'm hot]The Eleventh Commandment:Thou Shalst only say "Amen,brother".Amen, brother :lol:Amen, brudda (referring to the 10th commandment)amen Bruder! (german ftw)I'm invulnerable to everything, except Lenin and Dragoonson.That's impossible. I love people.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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