So I was a bad boy at school and my Biology teacher made me write a story about Bongo. Bongo is his mascotte, looks like a monkey with a big smile. That lesson we watched a small video about the Tree man. Google it if you want to know more. BTW: He is real, no joke -.-

 

 

 

So, is it good enough?

 

[hide=~Story~ Bongo visiting the Tree man in the hospital]Once upon a time, Bongo was sad. Mr. van Iterson was at home because it was vacation. Bongo needed a friend to talk to. Night came.. Bongo was still sad and decided to go watch some TV. First he watched a film, but that got boring. He zapped and zapped until he finally found something interesting: an interesting documentary about a Tree man. Ooh! Thats where I come from! Bongo said. Very interesting.. He is also friendless. Bongo watched and watched all night and decided that he wanted to meet the Tree man. He knew there was money in his wallet, but he didnt think it was enough to fly him to the U.S.A. Then he remembered! Of course! He had a lot of money in the bank! And so he went to the bank and took all his money. Then he surfed the internet for a flight and purchased one. Tomorrow Im in the U.S.A with the Tree man!

 

 

 

The next morning, just before he left, he wrote a few lines on a piece of paper for Mr. van Iterson. Looking for a new friend, had a great time with you. Thanks, Bongo.

 

Once in the plane Bongo got really excited. He knew the Tree man was in the New York Central Hospital.

 

 

 

8 Hours of flight and 1 hour of taxi later, he was just in front of the hospital. Well, this is it! Bongo said. He walked inside, looked around for a bit and then went to the lovely young lady behind her desk and asked: Excuse me, miss. Where is the Tree man? The lovely young lady first had no clue what he was talking about, but then remembered that yesterday someone called the Tree man got surgery because he looked like a tree. Room 104 Said the lovely young lady. Alright, thank you! Bongo said, and went up the stairs.

 

 

 

Knock knock Bongo said Whos there? the Tree man said. Bongo is there! Bongo said.

 

Come in.. the Tree man doubted.. Hello, Tree man. How are you today? Bongo asked. They removed some of my branches! I can eat now without help! the Tree man seemed very proud of it. But what are you doing here? People just think of me as a creep. The Tree man sounded very sad. So do they think of me. All they want is cuddle me and then neglect me Bongo sounded sad as well. No one wants to talk to me, they dont want to be my friend. That happens to me too all the time! the Tree man said. Well, why cant we be friends? Bongo asked. Are you sure you want to be friends with a creep like me? the Tree man didnt believe Bongo. Yes of course! You seem like a very nice person! Bongo was happy. Will you be with me my next surgery, please? the Tree man asked. Bongo said enthusiastic: Yes, thats what friends are for. They smiled. Here, Bongo, have a banana. Bongo accepted the fruit and happily ate it. Not only happy because he had a banana, but he had a friend.[/hide]

 

 

 

 

 

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awesome

This comes a little bit too close to the moral value usually stashed in a pokemon episode

This comes a little bit too close to the moral value usually stashed in a pokemon episode

 

 

 

 

 

Well said. :thumbup:

This comes a little bit too close to the moral value usually stashed in a pokemon episode

 

 

 

 

 

More like Sesame Street.

Its pretty short, and I think the guy would be pretty pissed to be called "Tree Man" rather than his real name.

 

 

 

Seriously, its a guy with a disease, not some freak of nature, he should be treated like a human, would you come up with a name like that for someone in a wheelchair?

 

 

 

I suggest you come up with another story anyway, this seems rather uninspired, and to be frank, boring and filled with the crap that is probably expected from T.V. (Two people meet, and after about a minute of talking, suddenly become best friends.)

 

 

 

I suggest you try again, try writing about the Monkey's life in the jungle, you might be able to come up with a few ideas from that.

It had to go about Bongo and the Tree man. Btw, he's globally known as the Tree man. He is Indonesian and I doubt people know his real name.. This isn't related to pokemon in any way..

It think this is a really great story to fit into the category of children's stories. However, I agree with Sworddude, you should use his actual name, Dede.

Wow, I doubt you couldn't have failed more.

 

 

 

He's talking about how the story teaches just about the same morals that are hidden in any episode of Pokemon. Not that the story is like Pokemon -.-

 

 

 

@oegly, I think I've heard that name somewhere, maybe someone in my family was watching something about it.

one day, I killed bongo by strangling him with his own intestines. the end.

Is this Bongo? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bongo_(antelope)

One gruesome day Bongo decided to [bleep]e Tree Man's water and the Tree Man stabbed Bongo in the head. The end.

One gruesome day Bongo decided to [bleep]e Tree Man's water and the Tree Man stabbed Bongo in the head. The end.

 

 

 

How are you posting when your rank is "Temporarily banned"?

One gruesome day Bongo decided to [bleep]e Tree Man's water and the Tree Man stabbed Bongo in the head. The end.

 

 

 

How are you posting when your rank is "Temporarily banned"?

 

 

 

Poltergeists.

One gruesome day Bongo decided to [bleep]e Tree Man's water and the Tree Man stabbed Bongo in the head. The end.

 

 

 

How are you posting when your rank is "Temporarily banned"?

 

 

 

he's just that awesome