Clan Recruitment Images

[snewham]

Well I've been working on this for some time and just finished it now so I just wondered what you thought. This is just for our own thread, we'd use a completely cut down version when replying to people's "looking for a clan" topic :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Scott

[Nadril]

That background isn't distracting at all, nope nope. Cool your jets on the completely unnecessary animation.

[mister_moocky]

-Larger/clearer font settings

 

-Lose the lightning and butterflies

 

-Clean up border around the screenshots

[Skull]

I have a migraine now...

 

 

 

Maybe a little less flash to it? Also, the text is slightly straining on the eyes (maybe just because of the animations).

[snewham]

Thanks for the constructive criticism.

 

 

 

 

 

I have a migraine now...

 

 

 

Maybe a little less flash to it? Also, the text is slightly straining on the eyes (maybe just because of the animations).

 

 

 

 

 

It's nothing compared to how illegible the text in your signature is.

 

 

 

 

 

Scott

[Georgelemmons]

Kill the butterflies, and either reduce the lightning or just choose one frame. I really like the rest (it's pretty nice)

[Sam]

Thanks for the constructive criticism.

 

 

 

 

 

I have a migraine now...

 

 

 

Maybe a little less flash to it? Also, the text is slightly straining on the eyes (maybe just because of the animations).

 

 

 

 

 

It's nothing compared to how illegible the text in your signature is.

 

 

 

 

 

Scott

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you can't take crit, don't come here.

[Ouchy]

Maybe cut down some of the frames for the lightning, or possibly slow it down so it is less intense? And definitely change the text. It's hard to read.

[Skull]

Thanks for the constructive criticism.

 

 

 

 

 

I have a migraine now...

 

 

 

Maybe a little less flash to it? Also, the text is slightly straining on the eyes (maybe just because of the animations).

 

 

 

 

 

It's nothing compared to how illegible the text in your signature is.

 

 

 

 

 

Scott

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you can't take crit, don't come here.

 

He does make a valid point though, my text does suck :)

 

 

 

I don't even remember posting that anyways :?

[AndyPandy]

You don't need to slow down the lightning or anything, all you need to do is darken it a liitle.

 

 

 

+ I'm quite surprised you got that under 350kb :thumbup:

[Nadril]

Needs to take out all of the animations except for the picture slideshow which needs to be slowed down. Font needs to be something legiable (the fancy font is fine for headers but for the body of the text use a serif or sans serif preferably). Centered text is really boring composition, experiment with other alignments. I would also be wary of color, the black on light brown will not work well with certain fonts.

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and the actual content text is cheesy as [bleep]. It's just runescape. It's not an epic battle, it's a bunch of 12 year olds playing a game of chance with each other. :lol:

[The Observer]

I like it. :

 

 

 

(You should honestly have posted this in Clan Discussions as you would get criticism from clan officials rather than random people on Tip.it.)

[Kaphias]

Takes a while to load for those with slower internet, lighting is hellishly annoying, and text is too small/hard to read.

 

 

 

If you want someone to read something, make it easy to read. Duh. :wall:

 

 

 

Otherwise... good.

[Nadril]

I like it. :

 

 

 

(You should honestly have posted this in Clan Discussions as you would get criticism from clan officials rather than random people on Tip.it.)

 

 

 

Right, he should get criticism from kids leading a clan in runescape rather then from graphic artists, a few at least who I know are making a career out of it (myself included).