December 2, 200817 yr Well I've been working on this for some time and just finished it now so I just wondered what you thought. This is just for our own thread, we'd use a completely cut down version when replying to people's "looking for a clan" topic :) Scott ScottienIllusion Leader | Clan Europe Member | Team Nigeria Member | Ex BsE Leader | Ex MOD Member126 F2P | 137 P2P
December 2, 200817 yr That background isn't distracting at all, nope nope. Cool your jets on the completely unnecessary animation.
December 2, 200817 yr -Larger/clearer font settings -Lose the lightning and butterflies -Clean up border around the screenshots quit
December 2, 200817 yr I have a migraine now... Maybe a little less flash to it? Also, the text is slightly straining on the eyes (maybe just because of the animations). [bleep] the law, they can eat my dick that's word to Pimp
December 2, 200817 yr Author Thanks for the constructive criticism. I have a migraine now... Maybe a little less flash to it? Also, the text is slightly straining on the eyes (maybe just because of the animations). It's nothing compared to how illegible the text in your signature is. Scott ScottienIllusion Leader | Clan Europe Member | Team Nigeria Member | Ex BsE Leader | Ex MOD Member126 F2P | 137 P2P
December 2, 200817 yr Kill the butterflies, and either reduce the lightning or just choose one frame. I really like the rest (it's pretty nice) Thanks to Uno for the awsome sig <3
December 2, 200817 yr Thanks for the constructive criticism. I have a migraine now... Maybe a little less flash to it? Also, the text is slightly straining on the eyes (maybe just because of the animations). It's nothing compared to how illegible the text in your signature is. Scott If you can't take crit, don't come here. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
December 2, 200817 yr Maybe cut down some of the frames for the lightning, or possibly slow it down so it is less intense? And definitely change the text. It's hard to read. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
December 2, 200817 yr Thanks for the constructive criticism. I have a migraine now... Maybe a little less flash to it? Also, the text is slightly straining on the eyes (maybe just because of the animations). It's nothing compared to how illegible the text in your signature is. Scott If you can't take crit, don't come here. He does make a valid point though, my text does suck :) I don't even remember posting that anyways :? [bleep] the law, they can eat my dick that's word to Pimp
December 2, 200817 yr You don't need to slow down the lightning or anything, all you need to do is darken it a liitle. + I'm quite surprised you got that under 350kb :thumbup: So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be.
December 2, 200817 yr Needs to take out all of the animations except for the picture slideshow which needs to be slowed down. Font needs to be something legiable (the fancy font is fine for headers but for the body of the text use a serif or sans serif preferably). Centered text is really boring composition, experiment with other alignments. I would also be wary of color, the black on light brown will not work well with certain fonts. Oh and the actual content text is cheesy as [bleep]. It's just runescape. It's not an epic battle, it's a bunch of 12 year olds playing a game of chance with each other. :lol:
December 3, 200817 yr I like it. : (You should honestly have posted this in Clan Discussions as you would get criticism from clan officials rather than random people on Tip.it.)
December 3, 200817 yr Takes a while to load for those with slower internet, lighting is hellishly annoying, and text is too small/hard to read. If you want someone to read something, make it easy to read. Duh. :wall: Otherwise... good. 8,325th to 99 Firemaking 3/9/08 | 44,811th to 99 Cooking 7/16/084,968th to 99 Farming 10/9/09 | Runescaper August 2005-March 2010Tip.it Mod Feb. 2008-Sep. 2008 | Tip.it Crew Sep. 2008-Nov. 2009
December 3, 200817 yr I like it. : (You should honestly have posted this in Clan Discussions as you would get criticism from clan officials rather than random people on Tip.it.) Right, he should get criticism from kids leading a clan in runescape rather then from graphic artists, a few at least who I know are making a career out of it (myself included).
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