Sam Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 Maybe a bit small, don't know what to add to it. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 Moar typography :twss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted December 4, 2008 Author Share Posted December 4, 2008 I dunno :| I wanted the CCTV camera to come out of someones head, but I can't find any good standing people stocks :roll: Could anyone direct me to some? Preferably male ones :thumbup: 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 Too much going on at the right, which makes it hard for me to focus on the left part. My eyes went: To the left, to where the main text is (nice fonts by the way), *confusion* Reads CCTV, looks at the camera, reads DRUNK and then something of the rest. The part that you devided by the safety-line (below 'he is watching') has an unclear message, why does that part need a line and what does it devide? Keep it up, you're in the right direction :) [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 ^ Agreed with woopidoo. Also, maybe add something like a wall that the camera is on instead of having it come out of someone's head. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DementedHero Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 I don't really like the typography you got going there. It's just not working. It doesn't look good. The whole flipped and rotated text thing. The text on the left is fine, looks decent. The rest messes it up. I don't know what to advise, perhaps study some real good works of typography, see what they did to make it work. Give it something more. Perhaps a really subtle wall the camera is mounted to, and add the text in perspective. It'll still be a work of typography, but a bit more original and good looking compared to rotated and flipped text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted December 6, 2008 Author Share Posted December 6, 2008 K, thank for the input :thumbup: 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stilev Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 [hide=] [/hide] might give you some ideas, also a great song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElkNight Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 God no. That song was cool the first time listening to it. Now it just really pisses me off. 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted December 7, 2008 Author Share Posted December 7, 2008 [hide=] [/hide] might give you some ideas, also a great song What exactly has that got to do with critique of my work? 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 Everything lol. :P I don't get it (why he posted that song.) danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 Everything lol. :P I don't get it (why he posted that song.) The art style is simular... I guess. As for the picture, well the text placement is a bit confusing and hard to read... Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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