January 18, 200917 yr Hey Guys, This is my first ever "proper" signature made (i.e. one that isn't just render on a background). I tried my best, and it took me some time, but I'm quite pleased with it for my first one: V2: [hide=V1][/hide] Comments, suggestions and constructive criticism are welcome. Retired Tip.It Crew Mapper.
January 18, 200917 yr I would brighten up the main focus point (the guy) a bit and maybe even experiment with a bit of sharpening. The text's outline is really cheesy, I would go with a regular font or something basic in white. For your first it's a hell of a lot better than other first's here, so good luck in the future.
January 18, 200917 yr Author Thanks :thumbup: Changed the text, and brightened up the guy a bit. Also added a teeny bit of sharpening on the guy. Retired Tip.It Crew Mapper.
January 18, 200917 yr I would try blending in the render a little more on his back. Might be that just some blurring/smudging does the trick. So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be.
January 18, 200917 yr Not bad at all for a 1st time. I'm not a fan of blank black spaces because I fell that always something can be done there but, that is just me. I still think the guy is still a tad bit to dark, Other than that good job.
January 18, 200917 yr Not bad at all for a 1st time. I'm not a fan of blank black spaces because I fell that always something can be done there but, that is just me. I still think the guy is still a tad bit to dark, Other than that good job. Not meaning to shoot you down or anything, but if he put anything in the black space, it would look far too busy. OP: That's very nice :) What's needed to be said has already been said really. Good job, I look forward too seeing more of your work :thumbup: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
January 18, 200917 yr IMO, the focal is too small, the whole tag will look better if you make him/her bigger. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
January 19, 200917 yr Very good for a first tag. :thumbup: Focal seems blended well, but I do agree that the abstract stuff behind it should be darked a bit. I'd like to try a few things with this when I get home.
January 19, 200917 yr Not bad for a first. I think the background is a bit too blurry though, making it look like a mess of colours. If you unblur the area around the focal a bit, that would also help to blend the render in more. Also, taking a look at a few signature tutorials on for example http://www.deviantart.com might help, there are some very useful ones there. Good luck. :thumbup: pixel avvy by me deviantART
January 19, 200917 yr Not bad at all for a first effort :thumbsup: "It's not a rest for me, it's a rest for the weights." - Dom Mazzetti
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