Ouchy Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Quite possible, the best tag I have ever made O_o Made for a battle against Shiny, I bet he wasn't expecting something like this :P Glad I have gotten back into it after making a few Rusty tags... Took about 2 Hours, +/- 30 mins. Comments and C/C are appreciated. Update: Here's a new stock tag I made for a tounry on sG: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Hmm, i would say it is for sure one of your better ones! but i dont like how there is the 'film' over top of everything.. makes the sig look to 'bleh' other than that, work on blending and id say your set! 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 25, 2009 Author Share Posted January 25, 2009 The colour filter's? I'll take those off, and blend the render in better too. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wongtong Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Hmm, i would say it is for sure one of your better ones! but i dont like how there is the 'film' over top of everything.. makes the sig look to 'bleh' other than that, work on blending and id say your set! Very nice tag overall :thumbup: Maybe you could erase the filter from just the character so that he stands out more. 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 25, 2009 Author Share Posted January 25, 2009 Hmm, i would say it is for sure one of your better ones! but i dont like how there is the 'film' over top of everything.. makes the sig look to 'bleh' other than that, work on blending and id say your set! Very nice tag overall :thumbup: Maybe you could erase the filter from just the character so that he stands out more. You're a genius! #-o Is this any better? My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Hmm, i would say it is for sure one of your better ones! but i dont like how there is the 'film' over top of everything.. makes the sig look to 'bleh' other than that, work on blending and id say your set! Very nice tag overall :thumbup: Maybe you could erase the filter from just the character so that he stands out more. thats what i was thinking at first. maybe try doing that much better though 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Oh yea that is so much better. Interesting perspective. :) deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 25, 2009 Author Share Posted January 25, 2009 Oh yea that is so much better. Interesting perspective. :) Thanks :) thats what i was thinking at first. maybe try doing that much better though Oh goody :) Is there anything else you could suggest that I fix up? My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wongtong Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Hmm, i would say it is for sure one of your better ones! but i dont like how there is the 'film' over top of everything.. makes the sig look to 'bleh' other than that, work on blending and id say your set! Very nice tag overall :thumbup: Maybe you could erase the filter from just the character so that he stands out more. You're a genius! #-o Is this any better? \ woo I'm a genius. It looks much better. I think you missed a spot on the bottom right part of his face (There's some random dark bubble). 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 25, 2009 Author Share Posted January 25, 2009 \ woo I'm a genius. It looks much better. I think you missed a spot on the bottom right part of his face (There's some random dark bubble). :twss: That would be the background texture, in front of the water stock. I'll try and erase most of it over his face :) Wait...It's the water stock :P My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 The only other thing i can think of is maybe to add a bit of detail to the background its kinda of plain 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Good flow, good depth. Definitely one of your best. Try a bit of smudge blending? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 25, 2009 Author Share Posted January 25, 2009 Yaff: I'll turn the transparency up on the texture a lil' then :) Shiny: Thank you, and will do :) My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Looks good, but next time you do something Assassins creedy, show the dagger! [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 25, 2009 Author Share Posted January 25, 2009 I have no clue about the game at all, I just though the render looked good and was practical :P My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Nice tag, though to me it seems a little bland (colours), and I don't really like the line thingy on the right, it keeps drawing my eyes to it :shock: Though, keep it up, definetly your best tag yet on compostion and perspective terms! 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 that dagger :o [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Is this any better? Not really IMO, I'd just take the filter off the whole signature because I don't think it works, it just dulls the colours down too much. I'd also get rid of the border, but other than that it looks pretty good. Pretty good flow and decent effects. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 25, 2009 Author Share Posted January 25, 2009 Nice tag, though to me it seems a little bland (colours), and I don't really like the line thingy on the right, it keeps drawing my eyes to it :shock: Though, keep it up, definetly your best tag yet on compostion and perspective terms! Haha, I'll tune them down ;) http://planetrenders.net/renders/albums/userpics/13052/assasins-creed.png that dagger :o Ohhh...That over used render ;) Not really IMO, I'd just take the filter off the whole signature because I don't think it works, it just dulls the colours down too much. I'd also get rid of the border, but other than that it looks pretty good. Pretty good flow and decent effects. Alright, I'll take them off completely then. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 26, 2009 Author Share Posted January 26, 2009 New stock tag I made: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 IMO the focal is blending in waaay too much. Remove some of the color over the face and add some lighting and so on to it. It is not standing out very much. The weird shadowy thingy on the left in the background is distracting in very out of place. deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 26, 2009 Author Share Posted January 26, 2009 The weird shadow thing was part of the stock. I tried to remove him but I failed. I'll take your advice and try that. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 New stock tag I made: OUCHY USES REAL LIFE PICTURES AS RENDER!!! :twss: [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted January 26, 2009 Author Share Posted January 26, 2009 Lolwut? My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 The weird shadow thing was part of the stock. I tried to remove him but I failed. I'll take your advice and try that. Have you tried the eraser? IE: Try smudging it out or something? deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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