Skully Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 Followed a new tut and came up with this. Good + Bad? Thoughts? etc. Ok so I tried again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 Meh, It's a bit too bright. The text looks bad too... Remember to cut out anything you don't absolutely need(i.e the text) Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted February 4, 2009 Author Share Posted February 4, 2009 At least I didn't get hit with a newspaper. : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 Best get back here and pay what you owe! Onto the signature though, too bright like Unoalexi said. It's too blurry for my tastes too, although with the blur kind of moving your eye to the top right hand corner about you at least have a focal point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W00tpecked Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 Followed a new tut and came up with this. Good + Bad? Thoughts? etc. not too bad man, keep going you're getting much better. My GamerTag: o NoToRiiOuS x-W00tpecker | 2069 Total | 86/90 Fishing | 80/90 Mining- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 Good flow, but nad and uno have outlined whats wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawks Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 I like it, you could do with removing the text though. sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 Focal....? Try to have a focal, since it means I have something to look at. Flow as well. Border looks shabby, text looks bad and it looks quite messy and bright. Not liking the color choices, buts its an improvement nonetheless. deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted February 5, 2009 Author Share Posted February 5, 2009 So I tried again, better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Estonian dude Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 That's much better. Link for tut, pl0x? So I've noticed this thread's regulars all follow similar trends. RPG is constantly dealing with psycho exes.Muggi reminds us of the joys of polygamy.Saq is totally oblivious to how much chicks dig him.I strike out every other week.Kalphite wages a war against the friend zone.Randox pretty much stays rational.Etc, etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted February 5, 2009 Author Share Posted February 5, 2009 Really, or your just saying that so I give the link? :P [tut.] :thumbup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Estonian dude Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 I wanted the link for the tut and the new tag actually does look better. Much better. But what is that thing in the below-left corner? So I've noticed this thread's regulars all follow similar trends. RPG is constantly dealing with psycho exes.Muggi reminds us of the joys of polygamy.Saq is totally oblivious to how much chicks dig him.I strike out every other week.Kalphite wages a war against the friend zone.Randox pretty much stays rational.Etc, etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted February 5, 2009 Author Share Posted February 5, 2009 Tbh I didn't even notice it, i'm not sure. :oops: Just disregard it. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 really hot, you are improving quickly, much faster than I ever did 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 Actually I quite like your new one. It might do better being a tad smaller in height, but it's got a clear focal and everything. Colors are nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 Much better. The flow and colour is amazing for a newcomer. Text aint half bad either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripsis Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 Nice job! Much better than your first one :) It might do better being a tad smaller in height I agree with that. - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted February 6, 2009 Share Posted February 6, 2009 Tbh I didn't even notice it, i'm not sure. :oops: Just disregard it. :P *smacks with newspaper* Remember what I said about the text! Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted February 6, 2009 Share Posted February 6, 2009 I like the composition, but the text is putting off somewhat. Bottom left corner. Fix it. deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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