February 4, 200917 yr Followed a new tut and came up with this. Good + Bad? Thoughts? etc. Ok so I tried again.
February 4, 200917 yr Meh, It's a bit too bright. The text looks bad too... Remember to cut out anything you don't absolutely need(i.e the text) Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day
February 4, 200917 yr Best get back here and pay what you owe! Onto the signature though, too bright like Unoalexi said. It's too blurry for my tastes too, although with the blur kind of moving your eye to the top right hand corner about you at least have a focal point.
February 4, 200917 yr Followed a new tut and came up with this. Good + Bad? Thoughts? etc. not too bad man, keep going you're getting much better. My GamerTag: o NoToRiiOuS x-W00tpecker | 2069 Total | 86/90 Fishing | 80/90 Mining-
February 4, 200917 yr I like it, you could do with removing the text though. sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube
February 5, 200917 yr Focal....? Try to have a focal, since it means I have something to look at. Flow as well. Border looks shabby, text looks bad and it looks quite messy and bright. Not liking the color choices, buts its an improvement nonetheless. deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words.
February 5, 200917 yr That's much better. Link for tut, pl0x? So I've noticed this thread's regulars all follow similar trends. RPG is constantly dealing with psycho exes.Muggi reminds us of the joys of polygamy.Saq is totally oblivious to how much chicks dig him.I strike out every other week.Kalphite wages a war against the friend zone.Randox pretty much stays rational.Etc, etc
February 5, 200917 yr Author Really, or your just saying that so I give the link? :P [tut.] :thumbup:
February 5, 200917 yr I wanted the link for the tut and the new tag actually does look better. Much better. But what is that thing in the below-left corner? So I've noticed this thread's regulars all follow similar trends. RPG is constantly dealing with psycho exes.Muggi reminds us of the joys of polygamy.Saq is totally oblivious to how much chicks dig him.I strike out every other week.Kalphite wages a war against the friend zone.Randox pretty much stays rational.Etc, etc
February 5, 200917 yr really hot, you are improving quickly, much faster than I ever did 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
February 5, 200917 yr Actually I quite like your new one. It might do better being a tad smaller in height, but it's got a clear focal and everything. Colors are nice.
February 5, 200917 yr Much better. The flow and colour is amazing for a newcomer. Text aint half bad either.
February 5, 200917 yr Nice job! Much better than your first one :) It might do better being a tad smaller in height I agree with that. - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog
February 6, 200917 yr Tbh I didn't even notice it, i'm not sure. :oops: Just disregard it. :P *smacks with newspaper* Remember what I said about the text! Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day
February 6, 200917 yr I like the composition, but the text is putting off somewhat. Bottom left corner. Fix it. deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words.
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