Promise Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 I'm a vector kine guy, so...this whole weird C4D abstract thingamig is a bit new to me. Here is the first sig I tried with it. I'm still not quite happy of how it turned out, mainly because Lupe isn't blending to well. :x If it sucks, tell, but tell me how to make it better. If its good, tell me, and I won't kill you. :mrgreen: [Edit] [Added another one] [hide=I'm not quite sure what to do with this one.][/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 I like it, but the text stands out too much for my liking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 15, 2009 Author Share Posted March 15, 2009 Anymore suggestions? :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 The colors arn't good for the render, IMO. :? I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 15, 2009 Author Share Posted March 15, 2009 ok...I added a second. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 16, 2009 Author Share Posted March 16, 2009 updates. I need feedback dammit. :x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElkNight Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 For the (LT?) one whats with the new picture or whatever on the righthand side. I dont think it looks good there. 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 16, 2009 Author Share Posted March 16, 2009 For the (LT?) one whats with the new picture or whatever on the righthand side. I dont think it looks good there. Yeah, I was questioning that myself. I think I should focus it more on his visor instead. And yes, that is the god himself, Ladainian Tomlinson. :) Here's with the cut out refocused. Looks better, eh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 It's really nice actually. For such a short amount of doing this you're getting good. :) Good flow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElkNight Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 I still dont like the cut out at all. :? 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 17, 2009 Author Share Posted March 17, 2009 Thanks Nadril, I'll probably try making another one tonight. Jaerkdood, I'll post what it looks like without the clip. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripsis Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 Yeah other than the cut on the right, I actually really like it :) I just think it's too distracting. But you're doing a great job so keep it up!! :thumbsup: - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 I really like the one you have hidden. dont know why. i love it though. 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 17, 2009 Author Share Posted March 17, 2009 Ok, here's it without the clipping: You're right..it is distracting, but now that space looks empty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 That looks so much nicer with a smaller canvas: And it takes away all the blank space too ;) My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 Awesome use of sparkles to create flow there :thumbup:. Not really digging the duplicated and rippled render though, other than that it looks awesome for such short time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 17, 2009 Author Share Posted March 17, 2009 If i remove the ripple effect, got any ideas to replace it with? Or just leave it blank? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 17, 2009 Author Share Posted March 17, 2009 That looks so much nicer with a smaller canvas: And it takes away all the blank space too ;) I thought about that, it looks ok, but it makes it seem...smushed. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 17, 2009 Author Share Posted March 17, 2009 As I wait for more replys, I figured I'd pass the time working on another siggy. Some of you might recognize this stock. : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElkNight Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 I cant put my finger on exactly what it is. But I dont like the new one. :? The blue whatever seems really random and out of place to me. 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 17, 2009 Author Share Posted March 17, 2009 Yeah, you're right. I was just messing around, first time I ever used wire frames. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted March 18, 2009 Author Share Posted March 18, 2009 We must all be idiots. Only now did I realize unstopable was spelt with 2 Ps. :wall: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElkNight Posted March 18, 2009 Share Posted March 18, 2009 We must all be idiots. Only now did I realize unstopable was spelt with 2 Ps. :wall: At least you noticed. :lol: 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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