I'm a vector kine guy, so...this whole weird C4D abstract thingamig is a bit new to me. Here is the first sig I tried with it. I'm still not quite happy of how it turned out, mainly because Lupe isn't blending to well. :x

 

 

 

If it sucks, tell, but tell me how to make it better. If its good, tell me, and I won't kill you. :mrgreen:

 

 

 

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I like it, but the text stands out too much for my liking.

Anymore suggestions? :mrgreen:

The colors arn't good for the render, IMO. :?

ok...I added a second.

updates. I need feedback dammit. :x

For the (LT?) one whats with the new picture or whatever on the righthand side. I dont think it looks good there.

For the (LT?) one whats with the new picture or whatever on the righthand side. I dont think it looks good there.

 

 

 

Yeah, I was questioning that myself. I think I should focus it more on his visor instead. And yes, that is the god himself, Ladainian Tomlinson. :)

 

 

 

Here's with the cut out refocused. Looks better, eh?

 

It's really nice actually. For such a short amount of doing this you're getting good. :) Good flow.

I still dont like the cut out at all. :?

Thanks Nadril, I'll probably try making another one tonight.

 

 

 

Jaerkdood, I'll post what it looks like without the clip.

Yeah other than the cut on the right, I actually really like it :) I just think it's too distracting. But you're doing a great job so keep it up!! :thumbsup:

I really like the one you have hidden. dont know why. i love it though.

Ok, here's it without the clipping:

 

 

 

You're right..it is distracting, but now that space looks empty.

 

 

 

That looks so much nicer with a smaller canvas:

 

 

 

 

And it takes away all the blank space too ;)

Awesome use of sparkles to create flow there :thumbup:. Not really digging the duplicated and rippled render though, other than that it looks awesome for such short time.

If i remove the ripple effect, got any ideas to replace it with? Or just leave it blank?

That looks so much nicer with a smaller canvas:

 

 

 

 

And it takes away all the blank space too ;)

 

 

 

I thought about that, it looks ok, but it makes it seem...smushed. :P

As I wait for more replys, I figured I'd pass the time working on another siggy. Some of you might recognize this stock. :

 

 

 

I cant put my finger on exactly what it is. But I dont like the new one. :?

 

The blue whatever seems really random and out of place to me.

Yeah, you're right. I was just messing around, first time I ever used wire frames. :?

We must all be idiots. Only now did I realize unstopable was spelt with 2 Ps. :wall:

We must all be idiots. Only now did I realize unstopable was spelt with 2 Ps. :wall:

 

At least you noticed. :lol: