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draw, scanned, coloured.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

pretty much it reli, btw i know his sword goes from grey to red behind his back, this is usully a slow transition but u cant see it because its behind hi back :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well let me know what ya think :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rinoa was somehow and i know its wierd, but harder than cloud, especially as its samller, her eyes were tricky, tll me what ya tthink , also i couldnt find a very detailed pic, so it looks kinda plain, if ome1 finds a better pic plz let me use it! :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rinoa.jpg :D

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Pretty good, I hate the style though. Soooo, for the style good, for my tastes bad. However, I of course can not judge it based on my taste, but must judge it on it's style and format. So, 8/10.

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Thats awesome neo... hey do you mind if I get a copy of that and try and cell shade it for practice and post my results? I'll of course leave your name and what not there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

feel free to have a go at cell shading it m8! :wink: i respect the fact u asked my permission go ahead :D

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Awsome work, only thing i see that semi ruins the pic for me is the blade of the sword. IMO the red part looks realy lame lol :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yep i had my doubts over it too! :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i believe ull find version 2 alot easier on the eye

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Yes! Finally we get to see something else made by you that isn't a "line-based" image. No offence, though, you do it great, but it's nice to see something else from you. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for the image, since I couldn't draw to save my life, that is a very good drawing. But I think the colouring lacks a bit; the colouring on the axle-pads are, however, great, the others are sort of dimmed. So I suggest that you use brighter colours, especially on the sword, and add a neat landscape background. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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:shock: 10/10! that is awsome, tottally sweet!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

one thing, i dont get the red to grey thing? where is it? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also the end of the blade sorta squares off, should be more rounded like a scim or summit...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

apart from that, as Tony the Tiger would, thats g-r-r-r-r-r-eat!

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:shock: 10/10! that is awsome, tottally sweet!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

one thing, i dont get the red to grey thing? where is it? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also the end of the blade sorta squares off, should be more rounded like a scim or summit...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

apart from that, as Tony the Tiger would, thats g-r-r-r-r-r-eat!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thx azy ur opinion means alot, itsa pity that people arnt reli into brushed sigs like these, coz i prefer making em to my techno sigs :cry:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and yeah before i had the sowrd fading form red to grey, changed it though so dont worry about it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

glad to see my work is appreciated :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PS. just uestion, how would u people find a brushed sig a bit like this? reckon itd work?

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If cussing was allowed on this board...i'd be cussing up a storm on how awesome that is... lol sorry to say i've never played any of the final fantasy games... lol i asked neo i was like "riona?" and i didn't know who she was lol. Anyways awesome job neo, keep up the awesome work.

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U should decide where the light comes from before applying the shades :shock: and maybe shade all the body...the head looks a bit flattened without her noticable shadings.

 

 

 

Still nice work. I personaly don't like the Fan-arts in general cause they can't stand the original ones and the drawing teqnique isn't my favourite one (i'm for very busy hand-drawings) but i must say u did draw this very nicely. Plus Cloud is my favourite FF char behind Sephi...or actualy FFVII was a masterpiece...or both...whatever :roll:

 

 

 

8/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rinoa's one looks a bit...erm..well doesn't look as nice as the other :) But i know girls are so hard cause it's so easy to spoil their expression and female appeal with a couple wrong lines...*HINT HINT* the shoulder is totaly wrong...think about body proportions...looks like deformed this way...(still don't think i can make any good women hand-drawing...)

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U should decide where the light comes from before applying the shades :shock: and maybe shade all the body...the head looks a bit flattened without her noticable shadings.

 

 

 

Still nice work. I personaly don't like the Fan-arts in general cause they can't stand the original ones and the drawing teqnique isn't my favourite one (i'm for very busy hand-drawings) but i must say u did draw this very nicely. Plus Cloud is my favourite FF char behind Sephi...or actualy FFVII was a masterpiece...or both...whatever :roll:

 

 

 

8/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rinoa's one looks a bit...erm..well doesn't look as nice as the other :) But i know girls are so hard cause it's so easy to spoil their expression and female appeal with a couple wrong lines...*HINT HINT* the shoulder is totaly wrong...think about body proportions...looks like deformed this way...(still don't think i can make any good women hand-drawing...)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah woemn r totally rock to draw, and yeah my next pic has a definate light source :wink:

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