June 19, 200917 yr Looks amazing, Shiny :) Just make the transitions smoother, if you can :) :thumbup: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
June 19, 200917 yr Looks nice, really nice job. Although I question the choice of having the lines go in front of the focal instead of into the background, but your call I suppose. Still looks good, just a weird choice of it. Resources used? :) deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words.
June 19, 200917 yr It's definitely going somewhere, my biggest point of critique would be the composition. The lightbeams at the left look cool, but it makes the right side quite empty. (Which is interesting too, but the beams are too demanding.) Keep it up, find balance and think of what you place where in order to make it a striking manipulation :) [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
June 19, 200917 yr That looks great :thumbsup: The swirly light near the spaceman doesn't seem to fit the rest of the piece, but it looks great nevertheless Keep it up :
June 19, 200917 yr O.O @ Glowing lines. I'd suggest to remove them because.. it doesn't fit, at all. It's like writing an essay about a dog, then entering a cat. It doesn't mix, there's no coherence. I think you need to work on your positioning as well, it's dead center. Everything else is fine.
June 19, 200917 yr Your glowing lines never stop do they? Look: [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] [hide=][/hide] [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide]
June 19, 200917 yr It takes quite some skill to utilise the pen tool effectively to achieve certain effects. Even from preferring the pen tool over fractals and C4Ds, it can still take me a few tries to get a good pen tool effect. Love the pen tooling shiny. Always develop a skill that sets you apart and makes you unique. Most importantly, have fun! :) deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words.
June 19, 200917 yr Love the pen tooling shiny. Always develop a skill that sets you apart and makes you unique. Most importantly, have fun! :) Agreed, i immedeatly associate pentooling with you now. You are teh king You know that the men to sheep ratio has halved in the past ten years? only 10 to 1 now on your the island where they shot Lord of the Rings EDIT: Found a map of locations where they shot some of those images, not sure where the mountains are, you should go there sometime with your camera [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide]
June 19, 200917 yr Love the pen tooling shiny. Always develop a skill that sets you apart and makes you unique. Most importantly, have fun! :) Agreed, i immedeatly associate pentooling with you now. You are teh king You know that the men to sheep ratio has halved in the past ten years? only 10 to 1 now on your the island where they shot Lord of the Rings EDIT: Found a map of locations where they shot some of those images, not sure where the mountains are, you should go there sometime with your camera See Auckland? Shiny and I live there (Not together, of course) See from Nelson down? That's where the mountains are. :( My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
June 19, 200917 yr Love the pen tooling shiny. Always develop a skill that sets you apart and makes you unique. Most importantly, have fun! :) Agreed, i immedeatly associate pentooling with you now. You are teh king You know that the men to sheep ratio has halved in the past ten years? only 10 to 1 now on your the island where they shot Lord of the Rings EDIT: Found a map of locations where they shot some of those images, not sure where the mountains are, you should go there sometime with your camera See Auckland? Shiny and I live there (Not together, of course) See from Nelson down? That's where the mountains are. :( Swim. :thumbup: Anyway, the map of NZ looks like a photographer's paradise. Almost like a Runescape Guild... everything you need is in your reach. (beach, interesting landscapes, skies, good weather, etc) Ive got to go to sleep. #-o [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
June 19, 200917 yr Author Thank you for all the comments. I think pentool + glow is like my signature, something I put on most things. I guess its something which is the same in everything.
June 19, 200917 yr Keep at it, it's working for you :thumbup: My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
June 20, 200917 yr If I were you, i'd crop out the right side, its very blank and distracts the eyes. Good use of those neon rope things, brings the subject into focus better. I think the transitions from the sides are very abrupt, try smoothing it out better?
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