Decided to play with C4D some on this 'putter. :) . Gotta say, I like the iso camera angle for the program, can get some cool views with it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, this was my result. C4D + Photoshop. Didn't want it to get too hectic with a ton of brushing, so just kind of went for... I dunno, this kind of style. I haven't used a smaller sig in a while, kind of refreshing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well, what do you all think? I haven't even touched a 3D modeling program other than for landscapes in age's, let alone sit down and do an abstract for me. But I figured that if I take a small break from landscapes it would be for the better :)

where u slicing? lol well i have to say its pretty cool lol 8/10 lol..it gets boring by the time.

I just don't get why you put the slicing tool number in there :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Overall it's ok, but you should make the gradient overlay a little darker on the top part, it's too white.

 

 

 

Maybe if you changed the ocupacity on that layer it would help as well :)

It's kinda hazy on the top, and not much post editing. Your landscapes don't seem to have much photoshopping either, you really should try to experiment a lot more with it. :wink: Especially for abstract jumbles, they are very easy to quickly edit once you get the hang of it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I've seen the slice thing look good in a few designs, but I don't think it works at all in this one.

sharper image + anti-slicing tabs = better, eh?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

Somehow I think it would look better if you got rid of the haze, and maybe made the colours a little more saturated.

ok.......not my fav of urs..

Too hazy/faded, nothing stands out in it.

Looks very dull, i dont know much about c4d, but a better material would be nice.

Joo have the full version of C4D Naddie( :lol: )?

 

 

 

Or at least did you pay full price or whatever...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

i don't like it. there is nothing that stands out about it at all. maybe you need to freshen up some on your abstracts because this is nowhere close to some of your older work.