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comments on things that need changing, improving etc, thanks :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i also need ideas for the bg

Work on the shading a little more, the left girls right arm looks wierd, kind of jell-oey, faces are always good too...

Work on the shading a little more, the left girls right arm looks wierd, kind of jell-oey, faces are always good too...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks for the arm tip but i dont want obvious comments like faces that was stupid....

 

Work on the shading a little more, the left girls right arm looks wierd, kind of jell-oey, faces are always good too...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks for the arm tip but i dont want obvious comments like faces that was stupid....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He was only trying to help and saying it'd give a better general idea of how it looks with faces. No reason to be smug or rude.

 

 

Work on the shading a little more, the left girls right arm looks wierd, kind of jell-oey, faces are always good too...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks for the arm tip but i dont want obvious comments like faces that was stupid....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He was only trying to help and saying it'd give a better general idea of how it looks with faces. No reason to be smug or rude.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im sorry next time ill say thanks for obvious information :?

The woman on the right needs bigger breasts.

 

 

 

But overall it's a great!

The woman on the right needs bigger breasts.

 

 

 

But overall it's a great!

 

 

 

tru dat lol tru dat

thanks for the advice guys

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

better ? any other ideas /C+c would be appreciated

The guy looks smaller than the women, maybe make him bigga. make his jacket thingie longer and widen his chest givin him a neck. It's a different style from what I've seen before so you'd be best figuring out what you think looks better rather than asking for advice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looks very nice though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10 atm cus its a wip :wink: .

The guy looks smaller than the women, maybe make him bigga. make his jacket thingie longer and widen his chest givin him a neck. It's a different style from what I've seen before so you'd be best figuring out what you think looks better rather than asking for advice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looks very nice though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10 atm cus its a wip :wink: .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i was thinkingof completly re-doing the guy cos he was too small lol i was just waiting to see if anyone else could come up with something ;) and i still need an idea for the background lol

The two womens breasts dont look like they come out, just stick to them...

If you don't know, a rule at our school is you can't wear shorts past your fingertips. . .theblonds fingertips are practically at her pelvic area. . .I think her arms are kinda short :lol:

Those two woman look like WWF wrestlers compared to the guy. Also the arms of the blonde girl look weird. I guess more detail will come to it. :)

Those two woman look like WWF wrestlers compared to the guy. Also the arms of the blonde girl look weird. I guess more detail will come to it. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WWE :P

only thing i could really say is tidy ur edges

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

when it is as full zoomed out like tht edges should look rounded, but urs the jumps outward r not often enouhg so u can clear see squared off pixel levels

it looks great , expet what you might need to touch up a little bit on is the guy , he is holding the girls , but the arms seem to be to much seperated from him , make them be closer to him . not having a small gap