fAz1 Posted October 2, 2005 Share Posted October 2, 2005 update 1: comments on things that need changing, improving etc, thanks :P i also need ideas for the bg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APERSON Posted October 2, 2005 Share Posted October 2, 2005 Work on the shading a little more, the left girls right arm looks wierd, kind of jell-oey, faces are always good too... Why should we buy postage stamps when we can make our own?aperson being Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fAz1 Posted October 2, 2005 Author Share Posted October 2, 2005 Work on the shading a little more, the left girls right arm looks wierd, kind of jell-oey, faces are always good too... thanks for the arm tip but i dont want obvious comments like faces that was stupid.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted October 2, 2005 Share Posted October 2, 2005 Work on the shading a little more, the left girls right arm looks wierd, kind of jell-oey, faces are always good too... thanks for the arm tip but i dont want obvious comments like faces that was stupid.... He was only trying to help and saying it'd give a better general idea of how it looks with faces. No reason to be smug or rude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fAz1 Posted October 2, 2005 Author Share Posted October 2, 2005 Work on the shading a little more, the left girls right arm looks wierd, kind of jell-oey, faces are always good too... thanks for the arm tip but i dont want obvious comments like faces that was stupid.... He was only trying to help and saying it'd give a better general idea of how it looks with faces. No reason to be smug or rude. im sorry next time ill say thanks for obvious information :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
demonfirzen Posted October 4, 2005 Share Posted October 4, 2005 The woman on the right needs bigger breasts. But overall it's a great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brooce Posted October 4, 2005 Share Posted October 4, 2005 The woman on the right needs bigger breasts. But overall it's a great! tru dat lol tru dat <( *-* )> <(*-* <) (> *-*)> <( *-* )> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fAz1 Posted October 6, 2005 Author Share Posted October 6, 2005 thanks for the advice guys better ? any other ideas /C+c would be appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 The guy looks smaller than the women, maybe make him bigga. make his jacket thingie longer and widen his chest givin him a neck. It's a different style from what I've seen before so you'd be best figuring out what you think looks better rather than asking for advice. Looks very nice though. 8/10 atm cus its a wip :wink: . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fAz1 Posted October 7, 2005 Author Share Posted October 7, 2005 The guy looks smaller than the women, maybe make him bigga. make his jacket thingie longer and widen his chest givin him a neck. It's a different style from what I've seen before so you'd be best figuring out what you think looks better rather than asking for advice. Looks very nice though. 8/10 atm cus its a wip :wink: . i was thinkingof completly re-doing the guy cos he was too small lol i was just waiting to see if anyone else could come up with something ;) and i still need an idea for the background lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GonAndGary Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 The two womens breasts dont look like they come out, just stick to them... Thanks To: Everyone for the siggies, especially Kal for the Pixel.Currently Playing: FIFA 07, NFS: Carbon, Morrowind and Dungeon Siege II. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evilperson Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 If you don't know, a rule at our school is you can't wear shorts past your fingertips. . .theblonds fingertips are practically at her pelvic area. . .I think her arms are kinda short :lol: Everybody lovin' it, but ain't no body touchin' it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
How2PK Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 Those two woman look like WWF wrestlers compared to the guy. Also the arms of the blonde girl look weird. I guess more detail will come to it. :) Signature by Maurice SendakWhen the stars make you drool just like a pasta fazool, that's amore! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GonAndGary Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 Those two woman look like WWF wrestlers compared to the guy. Also the arms of the blonde girl look weird. I guess more detail will come to it. :) WWE :P Thanks To: Everyone for the siggies, especially Kal for the Pixel.Currently Playing: FIFA 07, NFS: Carbon, Morrowind and Dungeon Siege II. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 only thing i could really say is tidy ur edges when it is as full zoomed out like tht edges should look rounded, but urs the jumps outward r not often enouhg so u can clear see squared off pixel levels Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jonniewalke Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 it looks great , expet what you might need to touch up a little bit on is the guy , he is holding the girls , but the arms seem to be to much seperated from him , make them be closer to him . not having a small gap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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