Ok lines r dun any last c/cs before I start shading?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Update 6

 

 

 

 

 

 

Update 5

 

 

 

 

 

 

Update 4

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Update 1

 

 

 

 

 

 

Original

 

 

 

legs look a little long

The legs are too big. And if those are shortened arms will have to be too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

To visualize

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Stand up and hold arms down, it comes down ight past your hips on the thighs at the finger tips. Halfway between hip (around the beltline area) to the top of your knees. Also the full strecthed out armspan is roughly equal the figures height. Now leg to torso porportions is all genetic and up to you. Also depends on gender

The head looks a little big too.. Or maybe it's just the body that's too small :? ?

ok thanks for the points on arms and legs I pulled them both in a bit, will repost later today once I put in the figure for the other foreground character, no point in reuploading juts for thoose tiny changes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Once thats fine I will get going on the actual lines

hooray nice 2 see u back on the pixeling scene... lol im not an expert on proportions myself but the legs do seem long. what will it end up beeing of? mage again perhaps? lol anyway gl with it

Too big legs and arms.

heads to big

 

 

 

right arm ( for us ) to long

 

 

 

left leg ( for us ) to long.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the rest is ok for now.

Yup it is gonna be a mage, it is going to depict Paw from my pyro lord movies other side is gonna be pyro lord getting owned and maybe an upcoming character in bg as silhouette, but we'll see

Bring his waist down some, and maybe shorten the arms a bit, and it'll look better.

ok updated red figure and added in the blue figure

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

any last tweaks to red welcomed, but mainly want blue guy c/ced atm

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

so I can get on with doing the actual lines

The only problem I can see is the way you have your blue guy angled, compared to your red guy. If the blue guy is somewhat to the back of him, we should see more of like a shoulder kind of view, not so much of the red guys front.

yeah that doesn't quite make sense in the stick men, what I got in my head for the sig it sort of does though. althouhg I will bring the blue guy down a bit

i likee

updated again with near completed line work on 1 guy

Sheesh, that guy is stick-thin. Give his arms some muscle. And with no change from your previous work, he still has a receeding chin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's also a very unnatural posture, and the robes just flare out suddenly at the cuffs, without any volume to the rest of the sleeve.

nice im looking forward to see the result

ok I gave him a chin (i think)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Altered the bottom of the robes slightly to look more natural

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

bulked out his arms and tried to make the cuffs trail off a bit better

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other than just finished off detailing on him

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(See first psot for the update)

updated again cause I ground to a halt with what to do

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

first post explians it better

very nice paw

glad to see im not the only one to use lines as guidance on the rough draft... *pheww*

I have to say, this line-work is way better than your others, and bout the hand, I'd say brainstorm bout it, maybe try creating something non-rs, found out yourself, Originality is key (Stolen this sentence off DH :P)

the bottom of the robe looks a little rediculous. It looks like he's floating in midair

the bottom of the robe looks a little rediculous. It looks like he's floating in midair

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't quite follow what you mean. Care to elaborate?

Ok finished the linework finally any last c/cs?