Well started this the other day, basic idea is for my mate gonna be text saying sumat like "never underestimate noob power"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

c/c so far plz

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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i cant give proper c/c yet.... not far enough

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but from looking at it, doesnt look as if youve done anything about anatomy... all of your sigs seem to have the same problems

i cant give proper c/c yet.... not far enough

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but from looking at it, doesnt look as if youve anything about anatomy... all of your sigs seem to have the same problems

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what problems?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cause I have/am working on all problems I have been told of

 

i cant give proper c/c yet.... not far enough

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but from looking at it, doesnt look as if youve anything about anatomy... all of your sigs seem to have the same problems

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what problems?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cause I have/am working on all problems I have been told of

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The head seems to be disproportional to the rest of the body. :? That or the shoulders are too broad...

its the shoulders lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

one second more coming*

he's like a dwarf his just is as big as his legs and feet, ur legs r like 55-60% of ur body ur chest is like 30 and rest is head and feet or somting like dat we took it in science

the leg are like those humpa lumpa get ready for their dance, what the guy above me said. The legs are too short, to be percise, the thighs are too short.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

humpa lumpa lumbadido~

I'll list the main problems I see:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-his shoulders are too broad and too square.

 

 

 

-small legs and head, he seems to have a massive torso.

 

 

 

-you shaded his torso as if he was only round at the edges, his front seems flat.

 

 

 

-legs are too "opened"

 

 

 

-feet are too flat

 

 

 

-arms are too long and wide

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope this helps

I'll list the main problems I see:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-his shoulders are too broad and too square.

 

 

 

-small legs and head, he seems to have a massive torso.

 

 

 

-you shaded his torso as if he was only round at the edges, his front seems flat.

 

 

 

-legs are too "opened"

 

 

 

-feet are too flat

 

 

 

-arms are too long and wide

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope this helps

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:? man i was gonna make the ever so used gorilla remark... you stole everything i had for c/c :(

lol nice to see u bak again, oompa loompa lol. u really do like the colour purple don't u?

:? man i was gonna make the ever so used gorilla remark... you stole everything i had for c/c :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rofl...happy new year 2 u 2 :lol:

 

 

 

If i knew you were gonna make fun of him I wouldn't have posted 8)

lmao i dont believe i did that.. post cc for someone else sig in a diff post :shock: sorry for intruding

Well lots of stuff to work on for this one. I knew the figure wasn't right but I juts couldn;t put my finger on what was wrong. Will sort it out once I have woken up

ok updated with de umpa lumpa ised version

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know wasit area needs some tweaking cause waist is a tad high now, but i'll fix that tomorrow I am too lazy atm

Whats with you and seeing pecks through clothes? Take out the six pack at least, it looks like he has a bad stiching job or something. I can kinda understand the breast area being a bit more predominant under the clothes, but beneath that it should all be folds.

Whats with you and seeing pecks through clothes? Take out the six pack at least, it looks like he has a bad stiching job or something. I can kinda understand the breast area being a bit more predominant under the clothes, but beneath that it should all be folds.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

first 1 i did it on - experiementing

 

 

 

2nd and 3rd - put it as part of the metal armour

 

 

 

this one - will go eventually but is in for reference cause later on i am putting wrips into his clothes, so use thoose lines then and on rest of fabric bit remove em unless it is just a tight top, but thts prob not the case

He wears collant top now!

He wears collant top now!

 

 

 

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Its' probably me being dumb but:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what?!?

lol nice to see u bak again, oompa loompa lol. u really do like the colour purple don't u?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Where'd u get tht from?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I never used purple in my sigs. i used pink twice, but nvr purple

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

neway updated again, so this is getting a nice bumpification

Your characters look like you where trying really hard to stay in those black lines. Why? Take out the blacklines all together- they're gawdy and sharp because you don't anti alias. If those pants have so many folds, show the folds from the side as well. His clothes look like tights because you've adhered to the black lines too much. Also, the folds in his pants are way to random. Google picks of jeans- you'll see that folds follow a patern according to loosness.

Black lines stay there?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah right, I never leave the lines in they vanihs as I go along.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I konw the trousers need folds showing on the sides and they will come when I do the detailing on him such as cuts etc from battle whihc is next.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also why would I look at jeans? thoose are not based on jeans they are based upon the type of trousers I normall wear (got no idea wat they r called) but they r quite baggy and do crease very randomly as depicted in the pixel.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Should of porbably left uploading it til I had actually done the detaling, but too late now and I am dun for today cause my attention span is lapsing fast (darned holidays)

You defend yourself from every critique like its an attack and we should know already that your 'going to do it later'. Just because I'm critiquing aesthetic and not technical details like anatomy doesnt mean you can't just be grateful your getting replies.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also- why pruple and green? They clash horribly, I dont see what kinda color scheme your going with for the overall peice. :?

Didn't mean to come across like tht, but the folds in trousers r right for the look i am going for.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the bit bout outline etc is the next bit I am going to do quite literally

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And purple and green meant to clash as this guy is meant to be a noob in all the meanings of the word, the rest of it is probably going to be quite dark, probably nighttime infact

yea i was making a sig for monkey 933 but he wants a different theme now. but this was the old one. im posting it because the shirt looks like what i think your going for with the guys shirt in your sig. it shows his chest is muscular but dosent look skin tight. hope i helped.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also even if you did the purple and green colors for a reason they still will lower the sigs looks.

 

 

 

Oh thanks for tht pic, will try and fiddle around with the shirt to get right effect, but hey what can be expected I mean I learnt how to pixel 3 months ago and made the whole of 3 pixels I got alot to learn

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and as for the colours I do want the clash, but I see your point and think a lesser clash would work better so I probably try bring the pink down to a more pastel tone like the trousers are, see how that looks