"RUN. OR DIE.ÃÆââ¬Å¡Ãâé" is currently the title of my story. I'm still developing this story for a comic I will make soon, so feel free to give me some ideas (please don't steal this storyline/idea because it is now officially copyrighted and I don't want you to get into any unlawful trouble). I need someone to come up with Chinese names for my characters for now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A young man rescues a older man from a group of robbers. When he takes care of the criminals, the young man carries the older man to his house and cleanses his wounds. When the older man is ready to talk, the younger man asks him why the robbers were trying to steal from him. The older man says it is because of the supernatural hand he possessed. The stranger goes on to say that his hand possesses powers to make any human incredibly strong beyond their physical limit, and that he was born with it. After a long chat about his hand's abilities, the older man says he has to leave before dark. The younger man agrees and bids him goodbye.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The next morning, the young man goes for a walk in the woods and suddenly freezes; he finds the dead body of the older man under a huge tree that must've fallen in the middle of the night. Before giving the older man's body a proper burial, the younger man takes out a knife and amputates the supernatural hand and takes it for himself. Then after the burial, he went back to his house to rest.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

After his rest, the young man had a crazy idea. He cut off his right hand and pressed the stump of the older man's hand onto his stump of an arm. Instantly, he felt a buzz in his ears and the feeling of ultimate strength. With a new confidence, he decided to do his country good by joining its army. And with each winning battle, he taught himself new abilities that the hand could do, like split enemies in half with a point of a finger, and creating an earthquake by ramming the fist into the ground. He also realized that the hand never rotted, for some strange reason.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The enemy soon realized this new threat and assigned a mercernary to target the young man. The next day, the war ended, and the young man returned to his house to feast. Then the door was kicked in, and the young man found his supernatural hand sliced off and a spear through his chest. When the young man was dead, the mercenary took the hand for his own use. He learned the abilities and powers that the young man had before his death.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Later, the mercenary saw a beautiful woman and fell in love with her, and they bore a son. When his son was old enough, the mercenary gave the hand to his son and taught him the things he had learned. The son amputated his right hand and attached the new hand to his arm. When he grew older and got married, his wife gave birth to children, and he taught them the things he knew, and his children taught their children, and so on. This cycle happened over several generations.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The generations had started to give the hand to whomever son or daughter they felt like inheriting it to. This was where the real trouble began. With each new generation, the tree of relatives and connections grew wider and wider.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now it is the year 2006. There are over 600 family members and relatives. One of the many branches of the tree secretly possess the supernatural hand. Some want possession of it, and are going as far as killing each other to get it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

From this point on, the comic ends the narrative mode and enters the view of a 16-year-old girl. Her little brother, Dad, and Mom are the only family members she can truly trust. They are part of a very small group of family members who want to live a normal life, don't like to fight, and don't want to get involved with the hand. However, when a struggle happens and a greedy member of the family tree comes across the hand, the member uses his new fortune to help in his determination to kill all the remaining members...

Ever seen Idle Hands? Funny movie.

Nope. I like the way you made that connection, though.

Ever seen Idle Hands? Funny movie.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Idle hands are the devil's workshop. :twisted:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Funny movie :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and are you trying to make a webcomic sonic?

No. I'm trying to make a manga comic.

Some want possession of it, and are going as far as killing each other to get their hands on it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

LOL the irony....

 

Some want possession of it, and are going as far as killing each other to get their hands on it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

LOL the irony....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

LOL even I didn't notice that :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I edited it.

Sorry to be critical....but it sounds very clicḫ̩̉̉d. Also...the guy gives the old man a proper burial by hacking off his hand and fusing it to his own bloody stump of a wrist?

Sorry to be critical....but it sounds very clicḫ̩̉̉d. Also...the guy gives the old man a proper burial by hacking off his hand and fusing it to his own bloody stump of a wrist?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think you've misunderstood. Look at this quote from my storyline:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Before giving the older man's body a proper burial, the younger man takes out a knife and amputates the supernatural hand and takes it for himself. Then after the burial, he went back to his house to rest.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Does it sound like the younger man is giving the older man a burial by hacking off his supernatural hand? :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Does anybody have some real advice and suggestions to make? Something that will actually help me make this good? C'mon, you gotta have an imagination somewhat - or is that completely dedicated to Runescape? If that's so, I can't blame you :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways...got any good ideas?

I think this belongs in the Varrock Library ;)