So yeah, I decided to go a little more err, 'darker looking' shades?? :| Anyways, rate my progress, and expect updates :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Adroit\\

you've captured the action very well 8), 8.5/10 so far... shadings lookin good too.

you've captured the action very well 8), 8.5/10 so far... shadings lookin good too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I LOVE the pose of the guy on the left. It's awesome how he is struggling against the ice. Very cool.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looking nice. Just make sure you don't ahve shark edges by limbs. In some spots it looks like just some straight lines where they should be gently curved.

Yeah the action looks good, waiting for final to give more cc.

Thanks guys, i'll be sure to cut down on those edges, though, guess thats what i get for using the line tool :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Adroit\\

maybe remove the right wall... it makes mage bank look like a hallway rather than a decreit building

Update! :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now is when it really needs help, I can't figure out how to make a texture on the ground that's noticable, but looks good. Help? :? It also needs something more... a skeleton maybe? Some bugs on the floor? {insert your idea here}

 

 

 

and BTW every time I send it into Gale/PS7 its lightens my colors and ruins the look, any ideas on how to prevent this?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Adroit\\

the boots look odd. don't know how... possibly a few more details on them, or less details on them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

for the gound, just make it dirt. lovely pixellated dirt.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yo could have a bit of ice on the ahrim guy's whip, to make it seem more like he's casting the blitz.

Update, the only thing im concerned with now is the ground... i dont know how to make pixelated dirt :lol: C/c on the *near completed* edition?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Adroit\\

its missing a dead skele somewere and give the mage a phat all god sigs have phats lol

i think the drag shield should be a bit bigger, looks too small atm

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and add some creases to the ahrims?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

otherwise its lookin great

really nice but it would look better if the ahrims dude had a p hat or santa or sumthing

bah, now ask you: would a pker Ever wear a phat? I think not... besides, i hate huge-ego sigs... way overused.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Adroit\\