The story i made up Me!

[hubcap888]

ok! once upon a time there was this little inch worm all the other insects hates him because he was this ugly little thing, a few months later fall came then winter came he made his cacoon up on a tree branch and then waited out till spring. When spring finally came he decided wdf why dont i get outa this cacoon?! so he squirmed out of his rottin sack then he looked at himself in amaizment and so did his friends and hes like look at me now! im a moth! or whatever the hell there called...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The End :o

 

 

 

any thoughts about my story or coments u have plz post them. MY first story so dont be 2 hard on me :?

[Rilha]

That was...short. -.O

[archimage_a]

just 3 things.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It was short

 

 

 

It was short

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now I know thats only techniquely 1 reason but I thought it was so important it needed to be mentioned twice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And it was fairly basic story line.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In other words, I liked it and it was good for a first story

[Necromagus]

I am ... tired of these inane three line stories that only serve to clog up the server yet get more views and replies than most of the stories posted here that people have actually put time and effort into.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is supposed to be a SERIOUS board about SERIOUS creative writing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe topics like these are the reason I hardly bother with the Library at all anymore :|

[archimage_a]

Ok then just ignore people(well try to see past the flame and look at the reason behind what they have said) who say that you cant write or that you should stop because you only write a few lines.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You are entitled to write a story if you want to... Just dont double post or continually write stories of under half a page...otherwise people will flame you

[wishfish0]

and another thing u didnt make that up. That is a childrens book.

[Alduron]

I'm sorry but I am locking this because it lacks effort, originality and in my opinion a purpose (meaning I don't believe you posted this as a literary work of art rather something to occupy time/a joke).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please when posting on this forum try to make an effort to tell a genuine story, don't make readers guess your words make sure you spell check and use proper gramar.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Feel free to post a story when you take these things into consideration.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks

 

 

 

~Alduron