Runescape as we know it is a non-depotist land which covers the land and is filled with almost anything immaginable. Items verying from toads-legs to funny looking pointy blue hats (hint-hint), creatures verying from chickens to the all powerfull Kalphite Queen.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Have u ever wondered on how runescape came to be? Well... here is the story of runescape.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

in the beggining of the world there once lived three brothers, Asgarnia, Morytania, and Misthilin, they lived in the land of Algasia, which was a small unknown island off of what we now know of as Karamja. The brothers always were rivals, constantly pulling pranks on eachother and getting in fights. When they became old they imediatly parted from eachother planning to never speek to eachother again. When they left they realized that almost all of the world was unpopulated. That made them feel as they they had power. They explored all the land for years and years.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~~~80 years later~~~~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the brothers were now elders and all kings of their own dominion(each dominion named after the brother that ruled it).. They had communicated with eachother over the years. And all had armies and power. Before the Brothers died they made a treaty to accept their differences and to join there seperated dominions. this agreement between the brother was the creation of Runscape it self. That year all the brothers died peacefully, but there wish was that everyone in the land of runescape shall carry on their age-old tradition of uniting the land, and to accept the fellow citizens of runescapes differences, that way peace will be immortal throughout the land forever.

spell check. try to draw the story to a page.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It has possibilties but there is not alot there.

thanks for the advise :wink: this is my first RS story

liked it, my first story was no were near this good [but it was longer...] im pretty sure you accidently posted a new thread in reply to some stuff.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3/5

spell check. try to draw the story to a page.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It has possibilties but there is not alot there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ironically, it's you saying this.

 

spell check. try to draw the story to a page.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It has possibilties but there is not alot there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ironically, it's you saying this.

 

 

 

blipo, thats a bit harsh. Archimage isn't THAT bad.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No offense meant l0rd.

*Looks up* Don't spam and don't insult another user.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Alduron

thanks for the feed-back..... can you come up with more?

Runescape as we know it is a non-depotist land which covers the land and is filled with almost anything immaginable. Items verying from toads-legs to funny looking pointy blue hats (hint-hint), creatures verying from chickens to the all powerfull Kalphite Queen.

 

 

 

Have you ever wondered on how runescape came to be? Well... this is the story of runescape.

 

 

 

in the beggining of the world there once lived three brothers, Asgarnia, Morytania, and Misthilin, they lived in the land of Algasia, which was a small unknown island off, what we now know of as Karamja. The brothers always were rivals, constantly pulling pranks on each other and getting in fights. When they became old they immediately parted from each other. Planning to never speak again. When they left they realized that almost all of the world was dead and barren. That made them feel as they they had power but also alone. Thus they explored the land searching for anyone else, to settle down and start a family. Little did they know the story thta lay in their path.

 

 

 

(pointless thing on what they did, and how things happened)

 

~~~80 years later~~~~

 

 

 

The brothers, now elders. Kings of their own dominion. They had spoken with one and other over the years.All having armies and power. But before the Brothers died they made a treaty to accept their differences, to join their dominions. This agreement between the brothers was the creation of Runscape itself, showing how diversity always has a great potential. That year all the brothers died peacefully, but there wish was that everyone in the land of runescape shall carry on their age-old tradition of uniting the land, and to accept the fellow citizens of runescapes differences. And in that way, peace will be immortal throughout the land. Forever.

 

 

 

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Its a good story so stop here, don't try to carry it on, because then it get into a really rubbish adventure story, one that has been told many times before.

I think this sorta ummm how can i put this 7/10. It's good but not that good.

Also you forgot where Kandarin came from, Trollweis mountin... Krajama. those place too.

Uninteresting, terrible grammar: no capital letters, commas, or varied sentence structure. Bornig story.

 

 

 

No offence.