l0rd Posted March 7, 2006 Share Posted March 7, 2006 Runescape as we know it is a non-depotist land which covers the land and is filled with almost anything immaginable. Items verying from toads-legs to funny looking pointy blue hats (hint-hint), creatures verying from chickens to the all powerfull Kalphite Queen. Have u ever wondered on how runescape came to be? Well... here is the story of runescape. in the beggining of the world there once lived three brothers, Asgarnia, Morytania, and Misthilin, they lived in the land of Algasia, which was a small unknown island off of what we now know of as Karamja. The brothers always were rivals, constantly pulling pranks on eachother and getting in fights. When they became old they imediatly parted from eachother planning to never speek to eachother again. When they left they realized that almost all of the world was unpopulated. That made them feel as they they had power. They explored all the land for years and years. ~~~80 years later~~~~ the brothers were now elders and all kings of their own dominion(each dominion named after the brother that ruled it).. They had communicated with eachother over the years. And all had armies and power. Before the Brothers died they made a treaty to accept their differences and to join there seperated dominions. this agreement between the brother was the creation of Runscape it self. That year all the brothers died peacefully, but there wish was that everyone in the land of runescape shall carry on their age-old tradition of uniting the land, and to accept the fellow citizens of runescapes differences, that way peace will be immortal throughout the land forever. [iNSERT "I R EATIN TEH SHIX ATM" BILL COSBY SIGNATURE GIF HERE, LOL] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted March 8, 2006 Share Posted March 8, 2006 spell check. try to draw the story to a page. It has possibilties but there is not alot there. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
l0rd Posted March 11, 2006 Author Share Posted March 11, 2006 thanks for the advise :wink: this is my first RS story [iNSERT "I R EATIN TEH SHIX ATM" BILL COSBY SIGNATURE GIF HERE, LOL] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torque Posted March 11, 2006 Share Posted March 11, 2006 liked it, my first story was no were near this good [but it was longer...] im pretty sure you accidently posted a new thread in reply to some stuff. 3/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blipo Posted March 11, 2006 Share Posted March 11, 2006 spell check. try to draw the story to a page. It has possibilties but there is not alot there. Ironically, it's you saying this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncmd Posted March 12, 2006 Share Posted March 12, 2006 spell check. try to draw the story to a page. It has possibilties but there is not alot there. Ironically, it's you saying this. blipo, thats a bit harsh. Archimage isn't THAT bad. No offense meant l0rd. Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alduron Posted March 12, 2006 Share Posted March 12, 2006 *Looks up* Don't spam and don't insult another user. ~Alduron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
l0rd Posted June 13, 2006 Author Share Posted June 13, 2006 thanks for the feed-back..... can you come up with more? [iNSERT "I R EATIN TEH SHIX ATM" BILL COSBY SIGNATURE GIF HERE, LOL] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 Runescape as we know it is a non-depotist land which covers the land and is filled with almost anything immaginable. Items verying from toads-legs to funny looking pointy blue hats (hint-hint), creatures verying from chickens to the all powerfull Kalphite Queen. Have you ever wondered on how runescape came to be? Well... this is the story of runescape. in the beggining of the world there once lived three brothers, Asgarnia, Morytania, and Misthilin, they lived in the land of Algasia, which was a small unknown island off, what we now know of as Karamja. The brothers always were rivals, constantly pulling pranks on each other and getting in fights. When they became old they immediately parted from each other. Planning to never speak again. When they left they realized that almost all of the world was dead and barren. That made them feel as they they had power but also alone. Thus they explored the land searching for anyone else, to settle down and start a family. Little did they know the story thta lay in their path. (pointless thing on what they did, and how things happened) ~~~80 years later~~~~ The brothers, now elders. Kings of their own dominion. They had spoken with one and other over the years.All having armies and power. But before the Brothers died they made a treaty to accept their differences, to join their dominions. This agreement between the brothers was the creation of Runscape itself, showing how diversity always has a great potential. That year all the brothers died peacefully, but there wish was that everyone in the land of runescape shall carry on their age-old tradition of uniting the land, and to accept the fellow citizens of runescapes differences. And in that way, peace will be immortal throughout the land. Forever. _________ Its a good story so stop here, don't try to carry it on, because then it get into a really rubbish adventure story, one that has been told many times before. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death45 Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 I think this sorta ummm how can i put this 7/10. It's good but not that good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nutty Posted July 9, 2006 Share Posted July 9, 2006 Also you forgot where Kandarin came from, Trollweis mountin... Krajama. those place too. <-- this one better work.... >__< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted July 10, 2006 Share Posted July 10, 2006 Uninteresting, terrible grammar: no capital letters, commas, or varied sentence structure. Bornig story. No offence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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