My crappy first-timer.

 

 

 

 

WIp, and man... I'm a pixel uber-n33b comparing to some other people.

 

 

 

 

 

Only CC please.

Quite good but:

 

 

 

-Background a bit plain, not much variety in the horizon.

 

-Guy on right's shoulders, they look a little square tipped.

 

-Guy on left has no hair

 

-Background floor has hardly any shading

 

-Moon/Sky has no shading

 

-Guy on left's hat has no variety in colours

 

 

 

Don't worry about it sounding all negative.

 

 

 

I tend to think it's better to point out the bad things so you can correct them, rather than saying "omg dats ded gud lolz 1billyun out of ten"

 

:)

 

 

 

Just try to work on those a little bit. I understand it's still in progress though, so I'll watch this develop :D

Thanks, this helps me out, never realised that the blue mage hasn't got hair :P

needs to get smooooth.... :)

 

 

 

keepon trying :wink:

What do you mean with smooth?

What do you mean with smooth?

I don't really know what he's talking about either. :lol:

 

 

 

To add on to zipits post, I'd say that the robes need folds to look natural. Maybe this will show you what I mean. See how it has folds and has bits where it's dark and bits where it's light. :)

 

 

 

It just looks like you've done random lines on their robes.

Pixeling rule #1-spend more then 10minutes on a pixel sig and be sure you know how to draw before you start

 

 

 

Pixeling rule #2-If you think it sucks dont post it, get better and then post somthing good

 

 

 

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With that said, its not as bad as some 1sts by a long shot, but its still not great.

Pixeling rule #1-spend more then 10minutes on a pixel sig and be sure you know how to draw before you start

 

 

 

Pixeling rule #2-If you think it sucks dont post it, get better and then post somthing good

 

 

 

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With that said, its not as bad as some 1sts by a long shot, but its still not great.

 

Owned.

 

 

 

Humm.. its ok, you could work a bit mor in the guys. And a better shading.

 

 

 

~komodo

 

 

 

~+=_-U.P.D.A.T.E.D-_=+~

 

 

 

Edited:

 

Shaded mage

 

added glow to the stars

 

deleted the black in the flames and the black folds.

 

 

 

Have to do

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  [*:1q6460y4]Add shading under the blue mage's folds.
   
  [*:1q6460y4]Edit other stuff

its looking quite good!

 

 

 

thinks to work on:

 

>more shading...more blending the colors together(but your update is looking much better)

 

 

 

> better bg...give it perspective so it doesn't look like their standing infront of a backdrop

 

 

 

>anatomy....the guys figures look like poles under cloth...what i mean is their much more rigid. Give them a natural look

 

 

 

 

 

7/10 so far very good

What do you mean with smooth?

I don't really know what he's talking about either. :lol: .

 

 

 

sorry,

 

 

 

With smoooth I mean, not with alot of corners, the purple shield is like a stripe, the vulcano is like a triangle, the blast has 2 white lines, exactly same horizontal line as the sig's borders

 

 

 

Smoooth = with texture :)

 

 

 

Folding experiment, tell me if it's good.

Since this topic hasn't got the bump option...

 

 

 

*BUMP*

 

 

 

Folding experiment, tell me if it's good.

 

 

 

It looks good from where I'm sitting. :)

 

 

 

Folding experiment, tell me if it's good.

 

 

 

Shading is good, but put ripples on the edges, so even if it was a black silhouette, you could tell it's folded due to the edges of the hat being wrinly rather than straight.

Hat? It's just a random robe. And what do you mean with wrinkles at the edge?

 

 

 

sorry couldn't help myself.. 8-)

Hat? It's just a random robe. And what do you mean with wrinkles at the edge?