My deadline for this was yesterday morning :( , totally forgot so I had to ask for an extra day to finish (cough.. start, and then finish :lol: ), I noticed that everyone else in my class entered really poor photoshop posters, with other people's work crammed onto it from higher years (to make em look better than they are), so I decided to return to the roots of Graphic Design, Styling this 4 hour poster job on a Bauhaus artist called, Kandinsky.. who works using shapes to portray a simple message, I'd say it's pretty interesting and would catch your eye, as a poster.

 

 

 

Btw, its advertising my college's End Of Year Show (as in a working year sept-june) , so people will hopefully be drawn to join the college next september..

 

 

 

 

 

 

It should represent all creative courses to our college.. Don't be mislead if you don't understand it, it's not supposed to really mean anything, just illustrate its a art-y college :? ..

 

 

 

mix of..

 

 

 

Acrylics

 

Watercolours

 

Dirtywater (soil, teabags etc)

 

Photomontage

 

Photoshopping

 

etc

 

 

 

If you don't like it tough, im handin it in cus i've just ran outta time :P :lol:

Oh, very nice, Ter. That looks great. Awesome color choices and the overall pseudo-grunge look is ace. I love it. I really hope you blow the others out of the water.

I love it, but I think that the red stripe on top is too bright... I think I would of liked it better if it was the same red shade as that part circle. :)

The composition, or lack thereof, disturbs me. Somehow, there seems to be little... balance?

 

 

 

Technicaly, its excellent.

thanks for the comments, good news, that deadline was just for a 'proof' of the poster, to basically show what we want to do, yes the layout is... disturbing..? (tho the use of that word gives me a picture of you crindging :( , which can't be good).

 

 

 

I've got time to re-do the design, and work on the layout more.. But I initially wanted it to look energetic and playful.. Not too boring and structured.

It looks nice, the forms inmediatly reminded me of Kandinsky, of which we've got a few works (not real ones of course) in our house. But where Kandinsky's work looks like 'one piece' the upper part of this one looks like a base, and just different randomly placed forms and shapes on it. Of course you're no Kandinsky and so, so that's not that strange. I like the middle and bottom part though. Good work. :)

teachers love that kinda posters :)

 

 

 

I like it to, you will get a high grade for that one :wink:

Its quite a nice poster, I'm sure you'll get high grades for it :D

 

 

 

~komodo

 

 

 

Not re-doing, cant be bothered, got crits from tutors and it's finally come to this, the information is crutial, If I had it my way I wouldn't have so much text on it.. :cry: :wink:

 

 

 

its gonna be A3, that text at the bottom that you can't read is clear as day printed out. Just distorted through resizing..

 

 

 

thx for comments. :D