terley Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 My deadline for this was yesterday morning :( , totally forgot so I had to ask for an extra day to finish (cough.. start, and then finish :lol: ), I noticed that everyone else in my class entered really poor photoshop posters, with other people's work crammed onto it from higher years (to make em look better than they are), so I decided to return to the roots of Graphic Design, Styling this 4 hour poster job on a Bauhaus artist called, Kandinsky.. who works using shapes to portray a simple message, I'd say it's pretty interesting and would catch your eye, as a poster. Btw, its advertising my college's End Of Year Show (as in a working year sept-june) , so people will hopefully be drawn to join the college next september.. It should represent all creative courses to our college.. Don't be mislead if you don't understand it, it's not supposed to really mean anything, just illustrate its a art-y college :? .. mix of.. Acrylics Watercolours Dirtywater (soil, teabags etc) Photomontage Photoshopping etc If you don't like it tough, im handin it in cus i've just ran outta time :P :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabraulter Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 Oh, very nice, Ter. That looks great. Awesome color choices and the overall pseudo-grunge look is ace. I love it. I really hope you blow the others out of the water. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pink Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 I love it, but I think that the red stripe on top is too bright... I think I would of liked it better if it was the same red shade as that part circle. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godslayer Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 The composition, or lack thereof, disturbs me. Somehow, there seems to be little... balance? Technicaly, its excellent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted May 12, 2006 Author Share Posted May 12, 2006 thanks for the comments, good news, that deadline was just for a 'proof' of the poster, to basically show what we want to do, yes the layout is... disturbing..? (tho the use of that word gives me a picture of you crindging :( , which can't be good). I've got time to re-do the design, and work on the layout more.. But I initially wanted it to look energetic and playful.. Not too boring and structured. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
How2PK Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 It looks nice, the forms inmediatly reminded me of Kandinsky, of which we've got a few works (not real ones of course) in our house. But where Kandinsky's work looks like 'one piece' the upper part of this one looks like a base, and just different randomly placed forms and shapes on it. Of course you're no Kandinsky and so, so that's not that strange. I like the middle and bottom part though. Good work. :) Signature by Maurice SendakWhen the stars make you drool just like a pasta fazool, that's amore! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 teachers love that kinda posters :) I like it to, you will get a high grade for that one :wink: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 Its quite a nice poster, I'm sure you'll get high grades for it :D ~komodo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted May 12, 2006 Author Share Posted May 12, 2006 Not re-doing, cant be bothered, got crits from tutors and it's finally come to this, the information is crutial, If I had it my way I wouldn't have so much text on it.. :cry: :wink: its gonna be A3, that text at the bottom that you can't read is clear as day printed out. Just distorted through resizing.. thx for comments. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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